Fine Line by
snax0Severus/Sirius; NC-17; 620ish words
This ficlet was written in response to a prompt I dropped into Kinky Kristmas: Comment Kink, and let me tell you, this is everything I could have wanted from the prompt and then some. Essentially, I asked for "desperate, need-it-now sex" and tossed in "Things are different in the afterlife." And
snax0 turned it into something fantastic. There's so much in so few words. There are fab little bits of characterization, intriguing hints of a shared history, and of course, it's hot like burning. I think what strikes me the most about it, though, is how incredibly vivid it is. It really feels like a hot, sweaty, sticky, disheveled mess in the best possible way.