Comments | quirkysmuse: Inuyasha, "And So She Pretends" Sesshoumaru/Kagome oneshot, NC-17

quirkysmuse

Inuyasha, "And So She Pretends" Sesshoumaru/Kagome oneshot, NC-17

Jan 08, 2008 15:30

Fandom: Inuyasha
Title: And So She Pretends
Character/Pairings: Sesshoumaru/Kagome, with implied Kagome/Inuyasha
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: Manga compliant, post-Naraku, warnings for adultery and sexual situations, and lot of ANGST
Notes: This is for you, demonlordlover2. Thank you to scottishfae for the beta job.

Read it at A Single Spark.

Summary: With him, she ( Read more... )

sess/kag, sesskag, smut, inuyasha

Comments 20

foamyfan15010 January 9 2008, 05:22:28 UTC

Wow, I really enjoyed that!!! You're writing just keeps getting better and better, Heather. I'm really impressed. :o)

quirkysmuse January 9 2008, 14:00:58 UTC

Thanks so much! ^^

You may not be aware of this... cold_queen_5 January 9 2008, 09:36:11 UTC

But at one time I was a fan of Inuyasha and my OTP?

Sesshy/Kagome.

Soo...this tickled my nostalgia and I felt the urge to read.

I enjoyed.

Except for one small thing...

Kagome "quacked" around him?

Re: You may not be aware of this... quirkysmuse January 9 2008, 13:57:15 UTC

LOL, that's totally a typo my beta didn't even pick up! Ugh.
Thanks.

Re: You may not be aware of this... cold_queen_5 January 9 2008, 14:02:20 UTC

I noticed cause it...COMPLETELY threw me out of the story.

I was all "Wait...what? Quacked? QUACKED? Is she a duck? That's sooo a typo."

Re: You may not be aware of this... quirkysmuse January 9 2008, 14:04:23 UTC

Haha, sorry about that. I fixed it, so it shouldn't throw people out of the story anymore. ;-P

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xshadesofnight January 10 2008, 22:19:39 UTC

Wow, that was a really nice way of incorporating Kagsess into the manga storyline, without jumping into the future. So bittersweet, I like the way Sesshoumaru shows curiosity, his mood indicators seem quite subtle. And how despite things not being what she thought, I guess you could say Kagome is just making the most of the situation?

And indeed, your writing just seems to get better and better (and it was already pretty good to start with).

quirkysmuse January 10 2008, 22:54:27 UTC

Wow, thank you so much. I appreciate it.

_blackthorne_ January 18 2008, 06:21:50 UTC

I can't say I was crazy about the plot but I have to say that your writing style has improved greatly. The descriptions were very well done and I could say that I was pretty much into it. Whatever you're doing for improvement, keep it up!

quirkysmuse January 18 2008, 12:33:26 UTC

Thanks, chica!

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quirkysmuse March 31 2008, 14:27:57 UTC

Thank you so much! I was glad you got a chance to read it. ^^