Dollhouse, "Clandestine Touch" Claire/Echo, rated R

[quirkysmuse]

Fandom: Dollhouse
Title: Clandestine Touch
Rated: R
Characters/Pairings: Echo/Claire, Adelle
Word Count: 1,075
Spoilers: "Ghost"
Warnings: Sexual situations
Disclaimer: I do not own Dollhouse or make profit from it. It belongs to Fox, Joss Whedon, and all respective parties.
Notes: Written before "The Target" (even though the episode was

Comments

[xraex21]

I really liked this. It was complex and sincere. Thanks! <3

[quirkysmuse]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[fembuck]

*hearts*

This was fantastic. Claire's longing, and desperation, and shame came across so clearly, and were so completely and heartbreakingly Claire. After Echo's gestures of caring, and going so long hiding in the shadows I could totally see her doing something so desperate, just to feel again.

Echo's innocence mixed with her adult sexuality, was perfect creepy and appealing. The single-minded focus and devotion that she dedicates to Claire, is so appealing, but knowing why she's like that makes it so wrong, and yet ...

The conversation between Adelle and Claire at the end was also very intriguing.

True feelings were stronger anyway without the complexity of language.

Brilliant last line!

Thanks so much for sharing, I thoroughly enjoyed it :D

[quirkysmuse]

Wow, thank you so much for your great review. <3

[lavastar]

That was so dirty and sexy! I loved the shameful feelings Claire felt, and the interactions between Adelle and Claire - they were all described wonderfully.

Thanks for posting!

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you very much.

[cyandragonfly]

That was brilliant!

Can't wait to read more of your dollhouse fics *g*

[quirkysmuse]

Thanks!

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you for the comments! I appreciate it.