Ouran - "Fortuitous Proposition" Kyouya/Eclair, rated PG

Jul 17, 2008 10:55

Fandom: Ouran High School Host Club
Title: Fortuitous Proposition
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Kyouya/Eclair
Word Count: 1,704
Genre: Introspective/Romance
Spoilers: Anime-only, spoilers for the ending of the series
Author's Notes/Thanks: Thank you to rashiea for the beta. Written for the "Flowers" theme at ouran_contest. Thank you also to the anonymous poster on fandomsecretsRead more... )

kyouya/eclair, ouran

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shalinilahiri July 17 2008, 16:51:43 UTC
Oh, I really loved this! You brought out both the characters beautifully, Kyouya and Eclair, such a mercernary combination.

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quirkysmuse July 17 2008, 17:30:17 UTC
Thank you so much!

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treeflamingo July 17 2008, 22:39:53 UTC
This is gonna sound weird, but hear me out ( ... )

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quirkysmuse July 17 2008, 23:25:38 UTC
Wow, thanks for the long review!

Thanks for picking up those swapping conventions. I like being consistent so I most definitely will change those. Thanks again!

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tetsu8no8niji July 21 2008, 14:21:07 UTC
surprisingly satisfying fic. never considered this pairing, but you did a good job putting them together in a way that fits both and feels organic. kyouya enjoying how he has to be at his sharpest when just sipping tea with eclair was great.

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quirkysmuse July 21 2008, 14:32:36 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3

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demoerin July 22 2008, 08:11:58 UTC
How does this manage to be so hot and just barely mention sex? I think it has to do with the ending; there's such a promise of wild storms building up in this match-up. I like that Kyoya was thinking of Tamaki and himself, and I love this line She smiles, and he can almost sense she’s laughing inside. He’s the one that should be laughing, but he doesn’t mind if they do it together. They will be deadly together. <3

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quirkysmuse July 22 2008, 14:02:57 UTC
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate it and glad you enjoyed it.

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quirkysmuse July 24 2008, 11:25:08 UTC
Wow, thank you so much for the kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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