Twilight-verse, "First Tooth" Edward/Bella, rated G

[quirkysmuse]

Fandom: Twilight-verse
Title: First Tooth
Characters/Pairings: Edward/Bella, Renee and Esme mentioned
Rating: G
Word Count: 1,080
Genre: Introspection/Drama
Notes:Written for the "Adventure" prompt at fridaydrabble. Thank you to rarity for the beta job.
Spoilers: none, general knowledge of the series

Summary: Bella reflects on her memories after receiving a package

Comments

[rhye]

*yay* Renee's strange perceptiveness was eerie in the book, and just as much so here. I wonder what she'll do in BD. I think maybe Edward should thank her for the package, though. He seemed to get the most out of it ^^

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you! Yeah, I felt I wrote Renee's intentions as subtle but I didn't realize how strong they came out in the prose. I'm glad you picked up on it, and thanks for 'persuading' me to write for that comm. ^^

[venetianglass]

Absolutely beautiful.

Oh, and I love your header. Yay for Logan & Veronica!

[quirkysmuse]

Thank you!

Yeah, I miss that show so much. They were so awesome. :(