Dishes, Suitcases (Minho/Key)

Dec 09, 2009 15:42

Dishes, Suitcases
Minho/Key

8D ....there's no excuse. I like this pairing. ETA: Please note I made some changes to honorifics. Thanks to everyone who pointed out my mistakes! :)

When SHINee comes to a halt, Minho has trouble leaving.

Kibum is the one who insists on keeping the apartment. )

fic: dishes suitcases, pair: minho/key, (shinee)

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undamage December 9 2009, 08:03:17 UTC
ahhh shinee fic from you! how exciting :) i really really liked this! that shinee's disbanding wasn't this big dramatic affair, that key gets the apartment (because he so would, that brat), and the fact this his and minho's relationship really develops after everyone else is gone. :3 i also liked the little details about jonghyun going solo and onew and taem going off to study and living normal lives.

Jonghyun and Kibum shriek at each other for a good part of their goodbye, and then Minho watches as Jonghyun finally gives in and bawls. “I change my mind,” he wails. “Kibum-ah.
sobbing, this is so jongkey.

“You nag a lot.”
Kibum’s laughter thrums in his chest, the warmth of his hand spreading into Minho’s cheeks. “Be glad, okay,” he says, ducking his head a little. “It means I like you.”
and this is really sweet :3 :3 :3

in conclusion, eee i loved this ♥ and i hope you write more for shinee! :DDD

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riiche December 9 2009, 09:09:04 UTC
DDDD: I can't tell you how happy your comment made me, seriously - um, well, I'm new to writing Shinee so really - you made me smile and I'm so relieved at least one person thinks it's okay. ♥ I do adore this pairing and ahhh I can't believe I only started writing them now.

Thank so so much! :)

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nautisch December 9 2009, 08:10:26 UTC
there is a lot I want to say about this but I'm afraid I'll sound like a deranged moron or something. but. um. I think you captured the minkey dynamic perfectly- they don't really talk to each other at all, but both of them would so be the ones to cling onto the group, the apartment, everything. I loved that key kept referring to it as his house, too. :3 and they're both just so very perfect, I don't even.

and the interlude about taemin finally getting friends outside the group (and in school, no less) warmed my heart. the poor kid. :") I keep scrolling up to reread parts of this, and it's so bittersweet I can't even take it.

I really admire the way you write for so many different groups, but your characterizations are always so spot-on no matter who you're writing about. it's amazing.

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riiche December 9 2009, 11:39:53 UTC
To be honest, writing MinKey was a lot harder than I thought - their relationship (or lack thereof) is just so intriguing to me, however. I'm glad you think they're in-character because that was one of my greater concerns ♥

Aaaah bb, thank you. I always wish I had more time to write for other groups (I said a very long time ago I'd write Shinee and I only started now dlkjha). But just. Thanks so much for reading this :)

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hypothermal December 9 2009, 08:18:26 UTC
Wow that was really amazing.

I kinda have lots of things to say and type out but I can't articulate it very well right now? Just.. you have a fascinating writing style that's very.. quiet and yet accurate about the people you're writing.

This is so good. Please never stop writing.

(:

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riiche December 9 2009, 23:31:10 UTC
Ahhh I'm glad you liked this; I wasn't sure it was okay when I finished it ♥ ...but these boys - they're so much fun to write. :'D

Thanks so much for reading!

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strascina December 9 2009, 08:22:07 UTC
i really, really, really love this. thank you for writing it.

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riiche December 9 2009, 23:31:35 UTC
Thank you for reading! :) I appreciate it so much.

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xxqod December 9 2009, 08:49:58 UTC
The part where they were saying goodbye made me cry T.T
But I'm glad they still meet up and Minho and Key getting together is just so cute! xD
Key is really an umma, getting Minho to do everything ^^

<3 ~~

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riiche December 9 2009, 23:32:49 UTC
....Key is absolutely fascinating to me. I totally crashed for him when I saw him in Idol Army - he's just kind of... ruthless and hilarious ♥ thanks so much for reading this, bb :)

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