argh!
ahh, as I'm nearing the end of my paper, which I might add, I hate that it takes me this long, some ideas keep flowing through my head and I gotta get it down. I kinda feel as if it might be good too!
time: 12:25 pm (to time)
Work: pain, bliss, hate, love
Determination, such is
Life: Accomplishments
time: 12:31 pm
Bah, I kept having this form of a haiku in my mind (stupid stevens poem and despite not being about nature, et al.) I had thought it was 7-5-7 rather than 5-7-5: It would seem to flow better:
time: 12:33 pm
Work is pain; pleasure; hate; love;
Determination
Such is life: Accomplishments
time: 12:37 pm
While the second one seems to flow better, and with me, seems to bring out more "sensations" of past accomplishments, the first one kinda brings out (more) an implied metaphor that life is made up of your accomplishments (which is kinda what I was going after). Course...Those that will read this, what do you think?
Hehe, to quote Stevens:
I do not know which to prefer,
The beauty of inflections
Or the beauty of innuendoes,
The blackbird whistling
Or just after.
Granted, it could just be that I've been awake too long, and have been working on this paper off and on for the last 16 hours....*sighs*
(ps. Holy cow, where did I get all that from?!? I think I may have just impressed myself, yet again, could be the lack of sleep.)
time: 12:25 pm (to time)
Work: pain, bliss, hate, love
Determination, such is
Life: Accomplishments
time: 12:31 pm
Bah, I kept having this form of a haiku in my mind (stupid stevens poem and despite not being about nature, et al.) I had thought it was 7-5-7 rather than 5-7-5: It would seem to flow better:
time: 12:33 pm
Work is pain; pleasure; hate; love;
Determination
Such is life: Accomplishments
time: 12:37 pm
While the second one seems to flow better, and with me, seems to bring out more "sensations" of past accomplishments, the first one kinda brings out (more) an implied metaphor that life is made up of your accomplishments (which is kinda what I was going after). Course...Those that will read this, what do you think?
Hehe, to quote Stevens:
I do not know which to prefer,
The beauty of inflections
Or the beauty of innuendoes,
The blackbird whistling
Or just after.
Granted, it could just be that I've been awake too long, and have been working on this paper off and on for the last 16 hours....*sighs*
(ps. Holy cow, where did I get all that from?!? I think I may have just impressed myself, yet again, could be the lack of sleep.)