I love the way you switch between funny and sad - very much in character for that place in their lives. And some of the lines are very funny. I particularly love: “Hey!” Her finger rose before she could stop it, as did the colour in her cheeks. “That happened to one guy.” - Buffy trying to make her love-life seem normal!
Nice to see the muse back for a visit, pet. Now, about that epic...
*hums merrily* It was nice to have the urge again. And as for the epic, I think it's almost there, but there's still a passage at the beginning where I go device-crazy and that needs to be fixed. Did you ever get my email with the altered ending?
I think Joss is an only child, and if you'll notoce, almost all his characters are, too - and if they're not, they end up killing their siblings or dying for them.
I thought it was a bit of a coincidence the number of only children and estranged siblings there were in Sunnydale. But then again, I wasn't sure if that wasn't just more of his issues.
Lovely ficlet, You're like the voice of reason on everything Bander. Though I just started enjoying S8, every time there's even a Hint of bander hidden in between the plot or the artwork or the dialogue, my eyes start twitching. It hurts .
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>>she could see his eyelid droop as well
That made me snort.
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For me, Xander will always be droopy-boy. ;) And annoying to write now that you have to de-pluralise all references to eye-associated things.
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“Hey!” Her finger rose before she could stop it, as did the colour in her cheeks. “That happened to
one guy.” - Buffy trying to make her love-life seem normal!
Nice to see the muse back for a visit, pet. Now, about that epic...
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*hums merrily* It was nice to have the urge again. And as for the epic, I think it's almost there, but there's still a passage at the beginning where I go device-crazy and that needs to be fixed. Did you ever get my email with the altered ending?
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Did you ever get my email with the altered ending?
I don't recall doing so, but I have a brain like a colander. Wanna resend?
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Though I just started enjoying S8, every time there's even a Hint of bander hidden in between the plot or the artwork or the dialogue, my eyes start twitching. It hurts .
XD
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I know exactly what you mean - it's like reading fanfic, apart from the fact you can't click 'Back'. :D
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