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[yumeyana]

Title: Can you really see?
Author: Yumehime Yana Hossuru
Pairing: YanaKiri
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG
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Comments

[shizukanahikari]

That was cute. I can picture Kiri going up to people and asking them things like that. hehe.

[myfigments]

I liked it, very sweet ^__^ Such a pleasant way to cap off the evening before bed <3

[fire_ban]

Ooh~ ^^ Interesting take on Yanagi's closed-eyes ness. I like it a lot. =) Renji's introspective voice is very... him.

I can see how hard you have been working so as not to disappoint your family, Genichiroh, Seiichi... yourself. I love this line, and the way you described Kirihara in general, the semi-vulnerable child he is. *^^* Nice one!

[crossing_by]

what a nice point view from renji ... and talking bout the baby of rikkai ... :D
its sweet ...