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Apr 28, 2005 10:36

Title: Can you really see?
Author: Yumehime Yana Hossuru
Pairing: YanaKiri
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG
Summary: ( It was a question everyone had asked him and yet this time, he wasn't answering it the same way he knew he should. )

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shizukanahikari April 28 2005, 04:01:34 UTC
That was cute. I can picture Kiri going up to people and asking them things like that. hehe.

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myfigments April 28 2005, 04:50:17 UTC
I liked it, very sweet ^__^ Such a pleasant way to cap off the evening before bed <3

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fire_ban April 30 2005, 07:27:22 UTC
Ooh~ ^^ Interesting take on Yanagi's closed-eyes ness. I like it a lot. =) Renji's introspective voice is very... him.

I can see how hard you have been working so as not to disappoint your family, Genichiroh, Seiichi... yourself. I love this line, and the way you described Kirihara in general, the semi-vulnerable child he is. *^^* Nice one!

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crossing_by May 5 2005, 13:01:31 UTC
what a nice point view from renji ... and talking bout the baby of rikkai ... :D
its sweet ...

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