still time [dream pair, tf]

[yumeyana]

title: Still Time
author: yumeyana
pairing: dream pair, tezufuji (if you squint)
rating: PG
genre: drama
summary: He has always been there, just right beside him. And yet Eiji never really noticed.

crossposted @ potfics, tenipuri_yaoi and @ my fic journal, quilled_dreams where it sleeps.

Comments

[kazura_uyurin]

I got a little lost somewhere with the nameless conversations. Some of them only. Like the one with Taka-san, Inui and... is it Eiji? And someone else? Okay, maybe it's because I was speed reading due to time constrains. ^^"

Aww... this is so bittersweet. Despite Dream Pair being the main pairing, I still feel a little tingly with Tezuka's concern. ^^ I like it!

[yumeyana]

*grins* sorry for the confusion. (^^;) thanks for reading and i'm glad you liked it!

[polyurethane]

Awww. So sweet. < 3

[yumeyana]

thanks for reading!

[polyurethane]

You're welcome~

[gekkonorondo]

...That made me sad. So beautiful. I really enjoyed trying to figure out who the conversations were between. I really enjoyed it, even if the end touched me right there. The Dream Pair just makes me so..happy. And this was so..oh, I don't even know what this was, but I adored as per usual.

Thank you oh so much for writing this. -grin- Do you mind if I friends the journal? There are some other things that I would like to read on here. -nods- So, would you mind? ^^;;

[yumeyana]

thank you. of course you can friend this journal. i wouldn't mind at all. ^______________^♥

[gekkonorondo]

S'ank yuu, m'dear! It'll be my honor to read some of the things that I've been missing out on. -nods, scurries off to friends the journl-

^_^

[elion_g]

loved your writing style. it kept me thinking. and you didn't need extra words to describe the mood of the story. the conversations carried the emotions of each pretty well. and you've pretty much captured each character's habits well enough that they were recognizable.

good job!

Re: ^_^

[yumeyana]

thank you! i tried hard to put everything into the conversations so i wouldn't put any other descriptions and i'm glad you liked it!

[aiwritingfic]

Mmm. Fuji everywhere. ^_^ I think Eiji's just a bit too wrapped up in himself sometimes ... but glad you wrote that!

[yumeyana]

thanks! i'm glad you liked it! ♥