The Shed Near the Vegetable Patch (Pansy/Neville, PG)

[quietliban]

Title: The Shed Near the Vegetable Patch
Author: quietliban
Rating: PG
Prompt Set: 50.4
Prompt: #48 Pressure
Word Count: ~550 words
Summary: Pansy tries to hide by the shead near the vegetable patch. Neville finds her by accident.
Notes: For 100quills. Same drill as before, meant to sit within The End of All the Fighting 'verse. There is a list for it here.

Comments

[lyras]

Lovely description of Neville looking for tomatoes. And there's some nice building here, of the relationship between them.

Poor Pansy - such a horrible situation she's in. Her alienation in the first paragraph is perfectly expressed.

[quietliban]

Thank you so much! I really wanted to get some backstory out, before they get to the sea-side cottage.

[severusslave_76]

Oh, my. That was fantastic. Such a short piece and you managed to include such in depth character study, it's absolutely amazing. The portrait you've given the reader of Pansy is so heartbreakingly beautiful and so dead on IMHO, it was a pleasure to read. The way you wrote Neville as so gentle and graceful and perfectly alright with himself is awesome as well. This was a pleasure to read, truly.

[quietliban]

Wow. I'm a little overwhelm by your response. I'm so glad that you got so much out of it, and that all the little things have come through.

Thank you so much!

[blonde_cecile]

Oh, this is so lovely. Your writing is wonderful. &hearts

[quietliban]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

what is this? is there more?

[demonsreiche]

I read a response you made to another person here, but... did I read the second part of this fic already then? *is so confused*