Fic: The Tragedies of Theodore Nott (Theodore Nott, OCs, PG)

[quietliban]

Title: The Tragedies of Theodore Nott (as told by Cassandra Nott)
Author: quietliban
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The Harry Potter universe is property of JK Rowling and her associated publishers etc. No copyright infringement is intended, and no profit is being made.
Summary: For some people tragedy is all they know.
Author's Notes: This was not what I had

Comments

[hibernater]

That's remarkably evocative. Summary of a life and it's essence- including everything around it that affects it, changes it, in so few words- stunning. Cheers.

Two typing mistakes, I think. Did you mean "a series of cracks and cries"? And "the crumpled heap that was her body"?

[quietliban]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed.

(Thanks, for catching the mistakes as well, they're fixed now).

[cutecoati]

Wow, that was... *shivers* So short, and yet so much in it! Marvellously done!

[quietliban]

Thank you very much!

[lyras]

I really, really like this. The straightforward language merely adds to the impact, and I like the first person POV. Short, but very good.

[quietliban]

Thank you!

[thimble_kiss]

Wow, as brief as it is, I really felt that. I love the contrast between the sketchy matter-of-factness of the girl's narrative and how dense it is with implications. It made me wonder and shiver at all the things left untold in this not-so-happy family history.

[quietliban]

Do you know what the thing is? (Because there's always a thing) I actually wanted to write about everything that's not in this when I went to write it, but this clicked and what I wrote before didn't. So I'm hugely glad that this works.

Thank you for your feedback!