As I said when I IM'd you, I like the second one best. Of course, the bathroom stalls reminded me of Dane, which made me laugh. Silence is always the best compliment.
Re: ALWAYS the best compliment? good to hear.turtletimeAugust 8 2004, 14:25:26 UTC
No, it doesn't apply to in bed. I apologize, when I said always, I meant usually when performing a piece of literature or music. ;) Obviously, I worded that terribly wrong.
Well you are just stressed about everything, huh? Regardless, it's a good poem. I especially liked the bathroom stalls part. Good insight. This is all the 'comment' I have in me right now.
Your Poetry and WritingavecmonamourAugust 8 2004, 23:04:58 UTC
I love your poetry and all of your other writings. You've inspired me to write and share some of my poetry from time to time. Although mine is never as good as yours, but it always has an emotion behind it.You are a great writer. I love you. Even I may get lost from time to time, that will never change.
My poet- I am enjoying your journal so much lately...I can hear you speak so clearly in my mind when I read what you write...and I know that you've never read most of these poems to me. I am so glad that you're doing this...I'm pretty sure that you have an audience, so don't stop.
It's 11:11 and I'm miles away...and you're right and my roommate's right and I miss you like fuck and I should be there and I shouldn't be here.
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I am enjoying your journal so much lately...I can hear you speak so clearly in my mind when I read what you write...and I know that you've never read most of these poems to me. I am so glad that you're doing this...I'm pretty sure that you have an audience, so don't stop.
It's 11:11 and I'm miles away...and you're right and my roommate's right and I miss you like fuck and I should be there and I shouldn't be here.
Still, thank you for doing everything today.
Yours always.
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