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quiet_ingenue

fic: 7 Times Gabriel Loves and Loses

Feb 15, 2009 21:37

Title: 7 Times Gabriel Loves and Loses
Characters: Gabriel, Virginia, Elle, Little Noah
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: Smile through the pain, don't let them see you hurt.
Summary: Exploring Gabriel's life with the theme of love.
A/N: Companion fic to Elle's 6 Different Valentine's Days. This was a lot harder to write because we honestly know next to ( Read more... )

tv: heroes, prompt table, character: sylar/gabriel gray, rating: pg-13, fanfiction, character: elle bishop, one shots/drabbles, pairing: sylar/elle, character: little noah

Comments 24

dragynflies February 16 2009, 02:46:41 UTC

I love, love, love how you write little Gabriel. How heartbreaking for him to find out from someone not his parents that he was adopted.

And baby Noah with happy Elle and Gabriel on vday. *sigh* What we could have had.

quiet_ingenue February 16 2009, 14:49:31 UTC

Hee, thanks. I just kept that picture of little Gabriel on the tricycle and imagined how he'd talk and act. So young and innocent then.

Right? We could have seen a great family and seen the evolution of both characters to be good parents.

havemy_heart February 16 2009, 03:00:55 UTC

I love these, especially the last one where Gabriel gets his happy family ♥

quiet_ingenue February 16 2009, 14:49:51 UTC

Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed these. :D

giantpanda24 February 16 2009, 03:17:15 UTC

I'm so glad that you decided to write this! It was interesting seeing how Gabriel changed through the years. The last one in my favorite! Fantastic job!

quiet_ingenue February 16 2009, 14:50:36 UTC

We never really get fics that talk about Gabriel's childhood so I figured I'd take a stab at writing it.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

emily64cooper February 16 2009, 03:31:52 UTC

Awh, these are so sweet.
I feel so bad for young Gabriel.
I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I can really see quite a few similarities between Little Gabriel's personality and Little Noah's personality. I like it.

And the last one... *mumbles about stupid writers*.

quiet_ingenue February 16 2009, 14:53:48 UTC

Thanks!

I think parents tend to pass on some personality traits to their kids sometimes and I think little Noah would have picked up some things from Gabriel besides powers.

lemomina February 16 2009, 03:52:57 UTC

I Love this so much ^_^
The last one is my favorite , I love the happy family and little Noah

Oh God , I hate those Stupid Heroes Writers SO MUCH

quiet_ingenue February 16 2009, 14:52:04 UTC

I think the last one is everyone's favorite, lol. But thank you, I love that you love the story so much! :)