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paralysis
g-dragon/mizuhara kiko, g-dragon/top, pg, 1190ⓦ

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[lovelyable]

asnlaknlas WHAT. WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN why didn't you tell me about it. i have to go to bed but i'm brimming with feelings about this so i'll be back later. stars in my eyes. NEVER LEAVE ME :

[quid]

I would never ♥ I forgot to link you earlier but this reminded me of Jiyong ; o ; (although I just read the synopsis for this film and now it's, um, odd to think about it in context)

[lovelyable]

okay i'm totally back (why did this take me so long.... having a job sucks).

anyway, this is gorgeous writing as always. i'm not a big fan of kiko, but somehow i ended up liking her in this bc i liked every aspect of how you described her. and gd! the details were spot-on, from the ashish jacket (i hate that jacket. he would have that jacket) to how he just demands attention. cries.

and i just really love the concept you based this on; this run-around the bush. i've never even heard of the movie you linked me to, but just based off the pic/quote, it makes my heart die a little for both gd and top ;_;. why can't they just be happy. can you write me something happy :(

[quid]

I'm glad you liked Kiko, even momentarily! I'm always sensitive about significant others (including rumoured ones) because they get so much hate, and then to add insult to injury, are used as 2-D plot devices, so I think it all ran away from me in this. and ugh I know, it's gross, I wrote that part in maligned glee. I'm glad that all worked; I'm slowly working on characterisation so please do tell me if anything strikes a sour note ; O ;

Happy is so hard to write :'( All my WIPs for them are sad and also grossly complex (aka they'll never be finished) so you can prompt me if you like!

Thanks for reading, again! ♥

[anonymous]

what kiko is this? kiko mizuhara?
anyways, this is gorgeous.

[quid]

Yes, it is, and thank you!

[sub_divided]

Very very good!

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Cheers! :)

[avages]

i'm basically a fan of everything you write. i don't know much about big bang and the fandom in general, but i liked the portrayal of your characters. there was something that felt very familiar for me to know that "yes, that sounds exactly like him!" and at the same time, i felt that i was learning something new as the story progressed.i just. cannot. anymore.
so sorry for this word vomit. but i just wanted you to know how amazing you are :)

[quid]

Don't apologise, I appreciate your words a lot! ♥ I'm really glad to hear the characterisation worked for you, as I do feel that my grasp on them (the boys, not so much Kiko) is still a work in progress, and more flattered still that you'd read this despite not knowing Big Bang well, so thank you very much! :)

[miwa201]

Wow, I absolutely loved this. To be honest, I'm not a GTOP shipper at all, but I really enjoyed this especially because of your writing. And, as a big Kiko fan, I like what you did with her character! I always dislike seeing her as a cardboard in fics for other GD ships, probably because she's been constantly linked with him. Either way, really good! I love love love your Jiyong.

[quid]

Ahh, thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear her characterisation worked from another Kiko fan - I definitely feel that same annoyance, so I tried to really capture her character as well as what their relationship might be like. Honestly, she inspired the whole thing, so I'm glad I did her justice, and Jiyong too. Thank you again ♥