orangejammies

Oct 16, 2008 03:34

Little Post sat quietly in a corner, his heart sinking to his boots rapidly. All around him were his boisterous brothers and sisters, festooned with comments and basking in hits on the online journal where they all lived, while he sighed and tried to keep up a brave front ( Read more... )

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anuradha_g October 30 2008, 12:44:41 UTC
Lovely little post! :)

Cheers!

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gulshan_gb55 October 30 2008, 15:56:52 UTC
I want your autograph
With a full paragraph
It'll be a surprise
If you don't win a prize
With your ratings going way above the graph!!!

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Lovely! rohit_gore October 30 2008, 18:36:46 UTC
This is perhaps one of the best. I am sure this 'little post' is a frontrunner in people's choice as well as the judges' choice. All the best!!
I have seen so many writers fail to give human feelings to inanimate things. This is an exception.

Cheers
Rohit

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Refreshing c_ravi55 October 30 2008, 20:24:54 UTC
Loved reading this little fairy tale..Simple, crisp, and oh so effective in conveying the rollercoaster of emotions experienced by the personified post !

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orangejammies October 30 2008, 20:54:04 UTC
anuradha_g: Thank you. :)

gulshan_gb55: Today Quick Tales, tomorrow the Booker! ;)

rohit_gore: You are very kind. :)

c_ravi55: Simplicity was the intent. Sort of like a children's story for adults. Glad you enjoyed it.

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hey revu October 31 2008, 06:00:47 UTC
Very different and a nice read. As always OJ!!:) take care.

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