Stargazers - Ni~yaxSakito - Chapter 6

[queerpassion]

Title: Stargazers
Author: etoilerose
Band: Nightmare
Pairing: Ni~yaxSakito
Rating: PG wut.
Genre: AU (Boarding School)
Disclaimer: All fiction, don't own the hot stuff and I'm not getting any money. Darn.

Prologue-Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

Comments

[kiku_kitten]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! *falls over in gleeeeeee*

[kiku_kitten]

*takes a breath*
Ok, now that that's over...

ZOMG That chapter was just... ah ah the... *tries to find words*

This line: But eventually, their strong holds would always waver, cramped by the arthritic pains of old age, and they would fall, hot and burning with a final resistance before hurtling into nothingness.

Was gorgeous!

And Saki's words at the end... so perfect. So wonderful! “I’m scared.”
Precious! He's in love, starting to realise at least the tip of it... and it's so new, so overwhelming, that he's scared. That makes me so very happy. I love to see characters experience that level of emotion without seeming overly dramatic. Gorgeous! Just wonderfully done! *snuggles* I can't WAIT for more. I'm so stoked about this story!

[etoilerose]

Ah! I am SO SO SO glad you said all that because it's exactly what I was trying to put across, and I didn't know whether I had managed or not ;~; Thankyou so much for all your comments, they really motiavate me to keep on writing! I shall try and bring you the next part soon! ♥

[kiku_kitten]

Good I wasn't just reading into it! XD *glee* You're welcome, sweetie. I like your story very much and I'm always excited over a new chapter, so the more I can motivate you to write more the better! *hugs and gives you cookies*

[kharlan]

X3 I luuurve your fanfic. :3 And actually, you write so well I need my translator opened. XDDD I've never read a ficcie with so much 'complicated' words, mah poor French brain. x.x BUT IT'S GOOD" +nods nods+ I learn more words and I go crazy because it's so good. X3 +love love+

Keep going, you have really HUGE talent. o_o One of the best in my opinion. x3 I loved how it ended, there's something special about that end. n.n <3

[etoilerose]

Oooh thankyou!! I do have something of an addiction to obscure words XD~ I'm glad they came in handy anyway!

I really can't put into words how much comments like this mean to me, it makes writing this fic 100 times more enjoyable! Thankyou!!

[jibunnohana]

Ahaha, waterproof trousers. Nice. XD

Ooo, it's getting really good~

[etoilerose]

XD bet they looked pretty sexy!

Thankyou! I hope it will continue to! ♥

[kageru13]

gjknfdjnkfsnkjf!
the way you write and describe things = the best thing ever.
*_* you make everyone else look like an amateur, damn you! XP

aaaarg, moooooore~!

[etoilerose]

;~; THANKYOU!! Though I would have to wholeheartedly disagree after reading some of the fics you have written! I will try to write the next chapter soon~

[recyclingcentre]

*dies*
BEAUTY!!!!!

Your writing is truelly unbelievable!!!!

[etoilerose]

Thanks!! I could never outdo saunders' Monkey Butler and his mad skillz0rs though