Title: Stargazers
Author:
etoileroseBand: Nightmare
Pairing: Ni~yaxSakito
Rating: PG wut.
Genre: AU (Boarding School)
Disclaimer: All fiction, don't own the hot stuff and I'm not getting any money. Darn.
Prologue-Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 (
Chapter 6 )
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Ok, now that that's over...
ZOMG That chapter was just... ah ah the... *tries to find words*
This line: But eventually, their strong holds would always waver, cramped by the arthritic pains of old age, and they would fall, hot and burning with a final resistance before hurtling into nothingness.
Was gorgeous!
And Saki's words at the end... so perfect. So wonderful! “I’m scared.”
Precious! He's in love, starting to realise at least the tip of it... and it's so new, so overwhelming, that he's scared. That makes me so very happy. I love to see characters experience that level of emotion without seeming overly dramatic. Gorgeous! Just wonderfully done! *snuggles* I can't WAIT for more. I'm so stoked about this story!
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Keep going, you have really HUGE talent. o_o One of the best in my opinion. x3 I loved how it ended, there's something special about that end. n.n <3
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I really can't put into words how much comments like this mean to me, it makes writing this fic 100 times more enjoyable! Thankyou!!
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Ooo, it's getting really good~
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Thankyou! I hope it will continue to! ♥
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the way you write and describe things = the best thing ever.
*_* you make everyone else look like an amateur, damn you! XP
aaaarg, moooooore~!
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BEAUTY!!!!!
Your writing is truelly unbelievable!!!!
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