Said and Done

Jan 29, 2010 00:53

Brandon POV

I need you to hear me 
I want you to feel this 
It should be clear as fear and plain as day

I flaunt myself in front of him, but I won’t let him have me.  You can’t always get what you want, especially with the likes of me hanging around.  He needs to know that.  Eventually everyone has a successor, whether they want one or not. 
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michele659 January 29 2010, 06:44:38 UTC
This was beautifully written,sad and powerful.It captured
what everyone was thinking and feeling at that time perfectly.
I hope you do more of these!

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a_life_defiant January 29 2010, 13:09:38 UTC
Thank you! I'm sure there will be more, I've been doing a lot of song!fics as of late. I have quite a few tucked away in my memories section if you're interested :D

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a_life_defiant January 29 2010, 13:10:33 UTC
Wow! That means a lot, thank you so much!

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pam81 January 29 2010, 10:49:38 UTC
Really beautiful....

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a_life_defiant January 29 2010, 13:11:17 UTC
:D Thank you for reading & commenting, I truly appreciate it.

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fancypantsdylan January 29 2010, 10:56:51 UTC
This is just beautiful, you've captured all the emotions flooding from everyone, just wonderfully and at the end does Brian truly realise what he's lost.

Lovely hon.

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a_life_defiant January 29 2010, 13:13:11 UTC
*big grin* Thank you! I had hoped it wouldn't be too scattered, what with all the varied POV's. So glad you liked it!

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teatotaller January 29 2010, 14:41:53 UTC
Very nice! I think you did a great job in bringing in Michael and Brandon to the situation.

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a_life_defiant January 29 2010, 22:06:11 UTC
Thank you so much!

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