no ray of sunshine beneath [In Moratorium, H/R D/R]

[queen_of_paine]

Aha. Fic Post! Evil bunnies were ickle slavedrivers. Proceed with caution because there is a) bald!Draco, b) messed up, and possibly dangerous, kids running around, c) heavy industrial angst. 'Tis a bright little ray of sunshine, that's what this is. I was almost tempted to entitle this as either Bruise Pristine or This Story is Not About Ron.

Comments

[kanoei]

Your usersname is very fitting. You are the Queen of Pain, because this tore me apart.
The atmosphere is so cold and distant, even the interaction between Harry and Ron is like that. You can feel the pain and sorrow combining in this heavy atmosphere and there is no way you can run or hide from it.
It's so sad... It's really just so sad... It's also brilliant the way you put it on paper.

And I am such a sucker for fluffy Harry/Ron! *runs off to find a fluffy fic*

[queen_of_paine]

*puts you back together*

Oh, thank you for that wonderful feedback. I'm sorry it made you sad, though. I hope you found some good H/R fluff. ^^

[kanoei]

Oh yes, I found my fluff *grins*. I just went in search of everything that shocolate wrote. Actually, most of her stuff is kinda smutty *grins more*.

Ps; you should write more. An angsty fic once in awhile wont hurt me ;)

[kolywoble]

Wow, I don't usually read anything that is not Drarry but I clicked on the link cause I was bored and am glad I did. This just left me groaning with loss and despair.

Excellent work.

[queen_of_paine]

You just made me terribly happy! Thanks for reading and commenting. ^^

[soberloki]

Erm, holy fuck.

That's a good thing, BTW.

[queen_of_paine]

*grins*

Err...thanks!

[blue_requiem]

This was so beautifully written, it made my heart ache how things were strained between Harry and Ron but you made it sound real.
And Draco. I love your Draco. ♥

[queen_of_paine]

Oh wow, what lovely feedback. Thanks for appreciating the story. ^_^

Draco's part was easier to write than Harry's and I guess it showed. I just love him more than any other character and the ideas just flowed more freely when I pretend to be in his shoes.

Thanks for reading!

[kerryblaze]

Nothing from Ron's PoV! OMG! This tore me apart. Very well done.

[queen_of_paine]

Nothing from Ron's PoV! OMG!

LOL. Ron is just teh object of lust for now. ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting.