He Was The New Boy In Town [jongkey, minkey, jongminkey] [1/1]

[queen_anything]

Title: He Was The New Boy In Town
Pairing: Jongkey, Minkey, JongMinKey
Genre: Romance, Humor
Rating: PG-15 (Language, Sexual Situations, Drug Use)
Word count: 3,179
Disclaimer(s): I own nothing.
Summary: It was always just the two of them until the freaking new kid had to come in and ruin it all for Jonghyun.
A/N: Written for a little contest between me

Comments

[ahmins3]

[ahmins3]

[queen_anything]

Thank you so much for the feedback! I seriously appreaciate the long comment.

Gah, I'll be the first one to admit that this is definitely horrible characterization, plot, etc., but I can't help but be in love with it. Maybe it's because I'm surrounded by a bunch of rich kids who are exactly like how I wrote Jonghyun and Key & to me it feels like poking fun at them? & I love your comparison to how 90's it seems, maybe I've spent too much time looking at Onew's comeback photo?

I apologize deeply for not putting my best into this fic. I promise to do better in the future.

& Don't feel pressured, the other author is my sister, so this is just a fun little competition we were doing. Your honest opinion is all that matters! (Honestly, though, I'm such a spoilt brat - I'm making her buy me food anyway since she's older. ^^;;)

Again, I can't thank you enough for this comment. I'll make sure to keep this in mind when I'm writing in the future.

<3

[ahmins3]

[queen_anything]

She is a VERY nice unnie. ^o^ Yeah, my older brother is in love with Kelly Clarkson, but my younger bro is slowly coming over to the dark side. LOL let's hope he NEVER writes fan fiction, though. (N den da prettie boy jonghyun marreed me. (He has an unhealthy love for Jonghyun.))

I guess I can't help going with what I'm familiar with. ^^;; & yeah, I thought it was okay to leave it like that, to get across the point Key gets what he wants? Idk, w/e.

Thanks for your time explaining this & everything!