Stick It To Me Babe [jongkey] [4/?]

Aug 11, 2010 20:10

Title: Stick It To Me Babe
Pairing: Jongkey
Genre: AU, Humor, Romance, Drama
Rating: PG - 13 (Language, sexual situations, and alcohol consumption)
Disclaimer(s): I own nothing.
Summary: Kibum has a secret; a secret who smiles a million words that can't be spoken, a secret who laughs with heart breaking innocence, and a secret who can give Kibum's  ( Read more... )

shinee fanfiction, jongkey, khunho

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queen_anything August 12 2010, 02:11:34 UTC
Spot for coatofmanos. <3

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blingdingdong August 12 2010, 04:41:25 UTC
First off, sir name =/= surname. Don't make me look like a bad beta.

Second, I love the bonding in this chapter. I thought the shared bed scene was cute. Also, loved was you wrote their arguments.

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queen_anything August 12 2010, 05:16:40 UTC
/cough What are you talking about, I didn't make that mistake ... ^o^;;

Thank you ~ ! >////< <3

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queen_anything August 12 2010, 02:11:57 UTC
Spot for sengseng. :3

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sengseng August 13 2010, 08:05:31 UTC
thank you bb!
oh and i don't know about others but i'm having a sweet tooth rite now so this is more than fine with me. i love your fic!
how can JJong be that cute in here? he's so sweet and sensitive and such a perfect boy friend. i don't know but i always think about Jongkey as a perfect combination. they just so perfect together. even though i'm a Onkey bias too but JongKey is always my top.
you're planing this up to 6 chapters? i don't know bb. i just got this feeling maybe you need more than 6, since we're in chapter 4 already. this is basically based on JJong's thoughts, so maybe it's lacking a bit of sense or reality or something. maybe some others' point of view can help everything more clear and together. oh and this is just me, ok?

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queen_anything August 13 2010, 16:28:35 UTC
Yay! You defintely need that sweet tooth to read this. ^o^
I think they work together so well because Jjong is totally whipped. XD & they really are! (They even agree! Have you seent hat behind the scenes when they were filming a.mi.go? 8D)
& you might change your mind after you read the next chapter. A lot is going to happen and it'll hopefully clear up some important issues. But /cough I think this mihgt go on longer just because I can't leave this fic, it's so thereputic to write!

Thank you for commenting ~ ! <3

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sengseng August 17 2010, 02:43:45 UTC
Nah, u dont have to thanks me for comment at all, its my little pleasure to read ur fanfic. I am the one that need to thank you bb.

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queen_anything August 12 2010, 02:12:14 UTC
Spot for siaht. :)

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siaht August 12 2010, 03:06:58 UTC
ehehehehehe first to take my spot /happydances

Nah I don't think this should come with that kind of warning, mostly because I don't think the fluff is that corrosive xD

But I'll let you know something: I don't know what to expect of this fic, whether it's intended or not, and at each chapter end I feel like there's something missing...? I don't know how to explain it better but basically... It doesn't mean I'm not loving it though.

Oh but yay for Jonghyun moving in, omg what a splendid family that will be ♥

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queen_anything August 12 2010, 03:47:42 UTC
Good! I was worried I had over done it this time. xD

Hm ... Do you mean, like it feels 'flitting' or like there's no real base? I think I get what you mean.

Thank you for commenting. <3

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siaht August 12 2010, 14:44:39 UTC
I think the lack of cliffhangers makes it look adrift... like it's going nowhere, or like you don't know where to take it. Apart from that the characterizations are amazing as always! Hopefully if you get my point you'll troubleshoot this to perfection ♥

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queen_anything August 12 2010, 02:13:04 UTC
Spot for salted_taiyaki. :)

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salted_taiyaki August 18 2010, 03:51:09 UTC
TEEHEE spot ;A; (and your icon i see what you did there~~~)

omg this chapter was just so adorable, like the others. i really love the way taemin and jonghyun are bonding and the love between jjong and key is just so suffocating and i ~love it buh ;___;
but seriously i think it's so sweet, jonghyun's love for kibum and his natural brotherly protection over taemin sob, this perfect relationshippp i never want it to break ;_____;
all of their characters are just so cute esp taemin and buh i want to pinch his cheeksss

i wish i had time to read the next chapter (i didn't realized i was behind one) but i'm dead tired so i'll read it tomorrow morning. but i am looking forward to more cuteness and everything buh ;w;

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queen_anything August 18 2010, 03:57:20 UTC
You're the first one to spot that! (or at least say antyhing ... )

Adorable is what I aim for LOL (just wait, sexy is coming next!)
I'm glad you like it! I never actually expected their relationships to eveolve like this & I have to say I love it too. :3

Girl, go to sleep! Don't worry about reading my fics, they'll be here later.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read & comment ~ <3

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queen_anything August 12 2010, 02:13:44 UTC
Spot for prong_012. :)

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