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quarticpolynomi

[infinite] cyclic constructs

Aug 09, 2011 03:36

Title: cyclic constructs
Rating: r
Word count: 950
Summary: Woohyun is an arrogant ass. But Sunggyu is worse, in some ways. Especially since he doesn't have to shave.

( Sunggyu catches him at it in the bathroom right after their music lesson ends. )

r: r, l: short, p: sunggyu/woohyun

Comments 33

ex_argh August 9 2011, 08:17:59 UTC

;___; I haven't read much Woohyun/Sunggyu~ but this was just dfjflgd so good! ♥ I really really loved it^^; the words you used, the way you described things was just ugh perfect? amazing? LOl. Idk.

And I love the little mentions of the things they do at night ;D its not too much but just kind of perfect (for me anyway).
Sorry :/ I'm gushing /corner but this was really lovely T~T so thank you~
♥ :D

quarticpolynomi August 9 2011, 16:25:06 UTC

thank you! pleased you enjoyed.

unodoseskimo August 9 2011, 08:43:51 UTC

This was breathtakingly beautiful, really.
I adore your writing, it has such rhythm and flow to it.
Plus you wrote my Infinite OTP ;3; which I love you even more for.
"shakes hands with the same palms he uses to jerk Woohyun off at night"
ngl that was my favourite line~

♥ thank you for writing and sharing such an amazing piece.

quarticpolynomi August 9 2011, 16:25:48 UTC

thank you for commenting! i'm glad you enjoyed it.

bloodyrose2442 August 9 2011, 09:39:13 UTC

Whoa this is amazing,beautiful~ The whole flow, the atmosphere of the story they are just breath-taking~ I wanna take my time and quote a few sentences that just really caught my eye:

"Please," Woohyun says, meaning yes and no and all of the words in between.

Heck this is probably my fave sentence- I am officially in love with it, you hear me?

It's been months since he's had to, and narrow streets and spotty lamplight doesn’t sound nearly as appealing any longer, not when the weight of tomorrow presses into his chest and makes it hard to breathe.

Again- an amazing sentence- especially the last part <3

Sunggyu tells him that nothing's fucking changed, that Sunggyu wants to sing, that if Woohyun wants to put on makeup and walk around without a shirt for a thousand flashing cameras, he should just quit. He doesn’t put on his headphones, though, and despite the angry rumble of nighttime in Seoul, Woohyun can make out the soft drumbeats of Nell’s Stay.Oh my god how can your writing be so perfect- I mean this is just and the last 3 ( ... )

quarticpolynomi August 9 2011, 16:29:02 UTC

glad it worked for you; thank you for your feedback.

and absolutely not--feel free! i'm flattered.

thunggyu August 9 2011, 09:53:19 UTC

Wow, it's... perfect.
Your writing is breathtaking, it has been awhile since I have liked someone's writing as I like yours.
I don't even know what to say because it's just amazing, the plot, the moments, everything.
This feeling when you reach the end and still want to read more is the best I could have read thousand more words of this, seriously. ♥

quarticpolynomi August 9 2011, 16:29:36 UTC

i'm glad you enjoyed the story! i'm flattered by your review. thank you.

shiihx August 9 2011, 12:31:41 UTC

amazingly awesome. sobbing irl.
this is so... good.
i've barely read any woogyu fics but this is just O M G !! <3
awesome. keep it up!

quarticpolynomi August 9 2011, 16:29:51 UTC

thank you very much!