Oh God as always you're brilliant and you're giving us a masterpiece which is beautiful and amazing and I love the way you jump in between and mingle realities~ Wish I was conscious enough to actually understand your message and all but I'm not. This is gonna be something never done before and don't listen to people- if it's you doing it it's gonna come off great dear ^^ You skills are something constant and they can only rise but not ever fall down because you have already achieved this certain level when your works are almost genius.
I shall continue to check this in the next few days and of course at the end of this week because I still have that little hope that my tiny, good-for-nothing brain will actually comprehend your hidden message.
No one should be that comfortable enclosed in a fortress of unstructured imagination.
There's something in that promise. It sounds eerily like a warning. Hoya looks back at the posters on the walls. He notices that he's never even heard of most of these bands. That some of the paper has
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don't put yourself down--it's nor a trashy thought at all. i was hoping to weave the story into the comments as well, actually, but you're seriously onto something. the writer in the story is intensely fictional, but the story she's writing has been written. in fact, i've already written it.
that's the logogriph! i was going to be less obvious, but judging from the response on formspring, people would prefer if i was a lot less subtle.
thank you very much for your compliments. i don't think i'm brilliant--i know i have a long way to go before anything i write is even conceivably passable, but your flattery is truly touching.
Alright so I think I'm dropping this comment after the first edit has already happened.
So my first job- find the differences.
"Easily. Quickly. I promise."This I am certain of. It has been changed. And there are a few other lines I'm doubting over but I don't wanna come out as a fool. The ending is a little bit changed I think though I'm not sure and as for this one part I have the lingering sense of something missing. We'll see one way or another anyways
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“Falsehood is never in words; it is in things.” italo calvino, "invisible cities"
Your sub-title/motto/prompt has changed (or so I think because I was sure seconds ago and now I'm doubting myself) - I don't know how to call it honestly but another thing I am really in love with as how you always manage to pick out an amazing sentence to go with an amazing fic~
+ the third part (me counting the infinity signs as marks of start and end of parts) of the story. There's something missing -I cannot quite say what but I think there's just something missing. And my giant spam has ended ended at least when it comes to this edit.
no worries about looking silly, really. i don't think you are. please have more confidence in yourself! i always appreciate your engagement. and your replies to my entries are always a real treat to read.
thank you so much for all of your kind words. i love engaging with people about the mechanics of writing--it's why i wrote this story, for the most part. regarding your suggestions: there are quite a few things that changed, and one or two lines that you pointed out that were there initially. but it's not about the individual edits, which is why i myself have not saved an original copy of this piece. it's about the transformation.
I cannot believe I have already missed so many edits (2 or 3 I'm not completely sure) edits but school's been ruthless- I have a lot of things to study right now so I'll actually be saving this so I don't miss it out. But I promise that I won't look at it while I'm reading the next edits- like I pinky swear I won't~
Sorry >__< (I have used the faces XD)
Btw if anyone among your readers has been saving them I would be really grateful if he/she can actually contact me and send me the edits I have missed out. I know I'm asking for too much~
I shall continue to check this in the next few days and of course at the end of this week because I still have that little hope that my tiny, good-for-nothing brain will actually comprehend your hidden message.
No one should be that comfortable enclosed in a fortress of unstructured imagination.
There's something in that promise. It sounds eerily like a warning. Hoya looks back at the posters on the walls. He notices that he's never even heard of most of these bands. That some of the paper has ( ... )
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that's the logogriph! i was going to be less obvious, but judging from the response on formspring, people would prefer if i was a lot less subtle.
thank you very much for your compliments. i don't think i'm brilliant--i know i have a long way to go before anything i write is even conceivably passable, but your flattery is truly touching.
those are my favorite lines, actually.
thanks again.
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So my first job- find the differences.
"Easily. Quickly. I promise."This I am certain of. It has been changed. And there are a few other lines I'm doubting over but I don't wanna come out as a fool. The ending is a little bit changed I think though I'm not sure and as for this one part I have the lingering sense of something missing. We'll see one way or another anyways ( ... )
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*an idiot (i am honestly)
*i'm
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“Falsehood is never in words; it is in things.”
italo calvino, "invisible cities"
Your sub-title/motto/prompt has changed (or so I think because I was sure seconds ago and now I'm doubting myself) - I don't know how to call it honestly but another thing I am really in love with as how you always manage to pick out an amazing sentence to go with an amazing fic~
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"I'd rather not, thanks."
"You don't really have a choice."
Hoya flexes his arm. He feels sturdy, unhinged. He could probably knock her out.
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thank you so much for all of your kind words. i love engaging with people about the mechanics of writing--it's why i wrote this story, for the most part. regarding your suggestions: there are quite a few things that changed, and one or two lines that you pointed out that were there initially. but it's not about the individual edits, which is why i myself have not saved an original copy of this piece. it's about the transformation.
i hope you enjoy the next edit.
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Sorry >__< (I have used the faces XD)
Btw if anyone among your readers has been saving them I would be really grateful if he/she can actually contact me and send me the edits I have missed out. I know I'm asking for too much~
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