[infinite] the wavefunction collapse

[quarticpolynomi]

Title: the wavefunction collapse
Rating: pg-13
Word count: 3270
Summary: There are many ways that Hoya and Dongwoo could have had their happy ending.

Comments

[reifica]

WOW GROSSEST A/N EVER YOU HAVE SERIOUSLY OUTDONE YOURSELF THIS TIME

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

anyway i fucking love that margaret atwood story (atwood in general) and THIS STORY IS A BILLION DIFFERENT KINDS OF LOVELY. your writing always manages to be simultaneously crisp and very very intimate. your dongwoo is so perfect I LOVE (YOUR) DONGWOO (although your dongwoo is always so pathetic WHAT DOES IT SAY ABOUT ME THAT I LIKE HIM SO MUCH LIKE THIS? WORST STAN) AND omg HOYA ;_______; my heart broke for him in sections A through J, god. i think he's a really difficult character to suss out -- he has such a stoic showface -- but your characterisation of him, your various futures for him, are all so believable.

as always you write the ~supporting characters SO WELL alcoholic gambler sungyeol makes so much sense. HEH HEH THE NINJA DONGGYU. relentless leader sunggyu!!!! ALSO SECTIONS D, E, G, K ARE RAINBOW-VOMIT-INDUCINGLY GOOPY please write all the fluff, all the time

favourite bits

Hoya remembers that dreams are fictional and accidentally crushes Dongwoo’s favorite character with his foot. i love the timing in this

Howon clandestinely attends exactly three meetings in MIT’s Rainbow Room and discovers that not a single counsellor understands that Howon isn’t looking to come out or be happy, he’s just looking to minimize the fallout.

He feels his stomach drop and his chest seize and he's pretty sure that this is exactly what he's been singing about, this is hitting all the right notes during a concert, this is executing a perfect step-spin, this is love.

AND ALL OF K omg. you are the b e s t never stop

[quarticpolynomi]

initially i wondered where all your text-based representations of faces had gone. i'd assumed that you'd finally located your wits; i realize that last time you mentioned that you might be hard-pressed to find them lying around these days.

but, no worries, now i see that you've merely moved from expressing appreciation in moving images to more static ones. you have not suddenly become more coherent. all remains right with the world. furthermore, your truly touching descriptions of the large percentage of this fic which consists of "goopy grossness" is slightly disconcerting; your beta notes didn't touch on the issue of the this fic possibly suddenly developing liquidity.

but i'll forgive the slight, this time, because my current state of extreme intoxication has prevented me from being more coherent. also, not everyone can balance a serious discussion of phase changes with fanfiction. i understand.