[infinite] the chronicles of myopia

Sep 16, 2011 04:39

Title: the chronicles of myopia
Rating: pg
Word count: 3284
Summary: Sometimes "teamwork" is just a fancy sort of euphemism.

It begins when Dongwoo realizes that he can’t dance in the streets forever, that someday, something will have to give. )

l: medium, r: pg, p: sunggyu/dongwoo

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reifica September 16 2011, 09:01:51 UTC
B E S T STORY BEST STORY BEST STORY (*´▽`*) (*´▽`*) (*´▽`*) WEEPS TEARS OF HAPPINESS

i love how seamlessly you weave canon into this story!!! AND OMG YOUR DONGWOO CHARACTERISATION I WANT TO FEED HIM GRAHAM CRACKERS AND PUSH HIM INTO ONE OF THOSE BOUNCY BALL PENS JUST LOOK AT HIS ANGST ;_; actually all your characterisations feel so spot-on to me & i adore the gradual change in dongwoo's feelings toward sunggyu!!! ALSO THE ENDING WAS SO SWEET which is apt because they are the sweetest pairing tbh tbh


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quarticpolynomi September 16 2011, 15:22:46 UTC
i attempted to locate the webaddress you so kindly pointed me at and was sadly unable to find it. and your odd love for an idol who seems to take pleasure in tying his hair into a puffball at the top of his head when he already looks like a museum fossil attempting to masquerade as a human being is often tremendously shocking.

while last time i provided you with animals colloquially known as "bunny rabbits," i do not think that any string of characters could represent the same enormity of, er, feeling that your moving images seems to express. so i will refrain.

i wrote this for you. i am pleased you enjoyed it, though i am perplexed by how often we seem to communicate in symbolic faces rather than words.

:)

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quarticpolynomi September 16 2011, 15:25:40 UTC
thank you kindly! this has a happy ending, though, so i hope that these tears are merely metaphorical.

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saracupcaked September 16 2011, 14:02:01 UTC
i love how you basically took what i feel about these characters and their situations and put words and actual emotions to them. it's like this doesn't even read like a piece of fiction because i could honestly see it happening

At night he takes his diary out of the backpack holding his collection of plastic weapons against the loneliness of Seoul and lists out everything he wishes he could do just a bit better than Lee Howon.

this entire paragraph makes me want to cry ;~~; brilliant writing ♥

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quarticpolynomi September 16 2011, 15:28:16 UTC
thank you very much.

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mammothcock September 16 2011, 15:20:14 UTC
oh, this is fantastic.

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quarticpolynomi September 16 2011, 15:28:31 UTC
thank you very much.

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shimizumiki September 16 2011, 19:23:31 UTC
So good... the characterization, everything... ;o;

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quarticpolynomi September 17 2011, 05:58:29 UTC
thank you very much.

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