Fic: Thoughts, Viggo/Orli, PG-13

[qthelights]

TTT inspired me into a fic, yay!

This is a Viggo/Orli, probably a PG-13 I should think, eludes to more though. Might continue this one if people like it.

Comments

[blue_ant]

OH. MY. GOD.

You can't leave it there. YOU CAN'T!! I'm telling you, right now, that you're going to force me to love ... Er. Wait. Strike that, you already HAVE made me love this pairing. I just ..

*begs* More! MORE!!

Er. Yes. I'm an adult, honestly.

Did I mention the story made me go all "eeee!!!" ... ;)

much lurking and random comments

[shaenie]

So now that I've lurked and commented on sarachica's journal, I've linked from there to here, and and lurking and commenting on your journal.

I make no sense, I know. It's 5 in the morning. That's my story, and I'm sticking to it.

In unrelated news, I thought this was gorgeous. Orlando, with his mind shying away from desire, getting a little closer to acknowledging every time it slips into his awareness. Priceless, really.

Wouldn't say no if you wanted to go on with it, but it's beautiful just the way it is. I like the 'anything could happen from here' feel of your ending.

Re: much lurking and random comments

[qthelights]

*S* i'm really glad you liked this one, its one of my favourites (if it isn't too conceited to like your own fic *L*) I really wanted to try and create a realistic feeling to the desire, because despite what much fic would have one believe, desire is not always so obvious or wanted right away. And i'm not gay, but I imagine that that brings in added insecurities and questions, especially if the person isn't sure of who they are yet.

*S* as to going on with this fic, I have thought about it, but I tend to agree with you that it works well as it is too.