Fic: Night Monsters - Jack/Ianto, NC-17

[qthelights]

Title: Night Monsters
Author: qthelights
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Not mine, I just play with them.
Summary: The night isn't only for monsters. Shameless pwp.

Comments

[satanassa]

Normally I am a little wary of PWP's, but this was quite enjoyable and did have a point! Thanks for posting.

[qthelights]

Thank you! I'm glad you braved the pwp-tag to read it

[demotu]

PORN IN THE MORNING, OH YUM.

I ran out of time to eat but you know, I'll take time to leave a comment. Remember those details people go batshit for? SO MANY. This one:

Neither of them rock further. The absence of movement builds its own slow ferocity.

OH THANK YOU. That rocks as a subvertion of expectations into total, total hotness. Omg. I could even feel it, dick-less that I am. Gah. Hot. Whole thing, start to finish. Yesterday was well spent. :D

[qthelights]

Thank you! I kinda liked that one myself.. I could not for the life of me make it sexy, and then I thought of that.. the absence of the sexy ;)

I'm very very happy that you liked it!

[blue_fjords]

Yay! New story! And it was lovely!! And awesome.
Especially like: Jack loving Ianto as a clingy drunk, the discussion about the stars, Ianto wanting it to be public. Like the best PWP, it goes beyond the porn and really delves into the characters. And it's still hot!
You set the scene very well, by the way, I totally felt like I was there watching them -- which, yay! :)
Thanks for posting!!

[qthelights]

*g* the clingy drunk part was me bowing to the schmoopiness i'm afraid! But I do so like the image.

I'm so glad the setting of the scene worked, 'cause i struggled with it.

I'm so happy you liked!

[halftime1030]

That was a lovely peek into their relationship and very hot outdoor!sex is a great way to start off my morning ;-)
Thanks!!

[qthelights]

Thank you :) Glad I could start your morning off well!

[smirnoffmule]

Beautiful. I particularly love the opening - you have a wonderful sense of place, the plass around them, even though they're wrapped up in each other. Very vivid and evocative. I like also that it's Ianto who wants to have sex where people can see - usually in this kind of fic it's that pervert Jack who convinces shrinking violet Ianto. I like it this way round.

Tiny Britpick coz I just can't help myself - smoking is banned in pubs in the UK. Which is a damn shame because I think cigarette taste is sexy as fuck.

[qthelights]

I'm very glad the sense of place worked, it was a bit of a struggle.. i'm much more an internal character person than an external scene person..

I like Ianto being the pervert too *g*

Oh and we have the same smoking ban in pubs too.. I figure this is either before that went through, or a very special pub ;)