Comments | qthelights: Fic: The Broken Bits of Ianto Jones, Jack/Ianto, PG-13

qthelights

Fic: The Broken Bits of Ianto Jones, Jack/Ianto, PG-13

Oct 12, 2008 15:43

Fic: The Broken Bits of Ianto Jones
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Gratefully borrowed and played with.
A/N: See, fic. Strangely gen-ish fic, mind. Porn next time then, eh?

( The Broken Bits of Ianto Jones )

torchwood, fic, fic:torchwood

Comments 50

toady2moo October 12 2008, 06:05:07 UTC

First of all... I'm drooling at your icon. Secondly fantastically written, although I'm so picturing Jack in that frilly maid's outfit

qthelights October 12 2008, 20:09:48 UTC

*g* well yeah, 'cause why wouldn't you imagine Jack in a maid's uniform?

and Thanks! :)

lambsendbeds October 12 2008, 06:30:16 UTC

Wow. That was really powerful. Jack's shame and horror. The chaos of Ianto's flat reflecting the chaos of his life. I found this passage particularly affecting:"He went back into the bedroom, trying to quell the impending sense of doom that was roiling in his stomach. Opening a wardrobe door, with a glance back at the bed to check Ianto was still asleep, Jack found a row of suits, hanging in dry-cleaner bag shrouds. Pressed shirts and colour-coded ties. Polished pairs of shoes sat on the dirty cream carpet below next to an open shoebox of brushes and polish. Jack tried not to imagine Ianto sitting in the dirt and chaos of the apartment in an immaculate suit, brushing and polishing, making sure his shoes shone and gleamed. For him."

And that last line just screams out for this to be continued....

qthelights October 12 2008, 20:13:24 UTC

Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it! I just figured that all that planning and deception would have to take its toll on Ianto somehow, and if they didn't see i at work then it made sense for there to be something wrong in his 'home' life.

pecos October 12 2008, 06:35:15 UTC

Brilliant and heart-felt...thank you very much. I've got tears in my eyes.

qthelights October 12 2008, 20:13:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it that much!

qaffangyrl October 12 2008, 06:40:30 UTC

wow. that was just beautiful. and best it fits neatly into canon.

qthelights October 12 2008, 20:14:51 UTC

The beauty of Torchwood is that there are so many gaps in the canon that can be filled believably with fic, isn't it? Thank you for the kind comment :)

hab318princess October 12 2008, 07:08:09 UTC

Heartbreaking and touching and just great.

qthelights October 12 2008, 20:15:13 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked it :)