Fic: Mathematics, Dom/Orli, R

[qthelights]

Looky!

This is dedicated to Dee, cupiscent, as a much belated b'day fic. Enjoy darling :)

Title: Mathematics
Author: girloftheq
Rating: R
Pairing: Dorli
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Comments

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[qthelights]

Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it.. don't worry about being confused.. it is maths afterall.. who isn't? *g* Just imagine Orli and all is well.
I'm glad you liked the idea.. weird what the mind comes up with at 3 in the morning *g*

[cupiscent]

Eeee! Yay! *hugs fic tight*

I will save this for when I'm at home and not in a computer lab where people might look over my shoulder at an inopportune moment.

Mwah.

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[qthelights]

*waits impatiently!!*

[cupiscent]

Eeeeee! Oh wow. Oh lovely.

What utterly made me meep was this line:
Or was it love? The universal language that is. Either way really.

Just tossed in so casually. Love. Yeah. and then back to the maths metaphors. So sneaky. So offhand. So Dom.

Very nice indeed. Hee. Pretty mathematical D'Orli. Thank you!

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[qthelights]

Your welcome :) I'm glad you liked it darling.
It's amazing I could even remember any maths at 3 in the morning *L*

[bunnysquee]

wow! i never thought maths could be sexy. you have made it incredibly so, but then you are using the uber delicious Orli as an example of a mathematical mystery, all "angles and curves," to be solved.

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[qthelights]

heh.. I never thought it could be sexy either.. I was trying to think of something unusal to apply to the situation.. and there it was.. heh.
I like the idea of Orli being angles and curves though.. very sexy I think.. thanks for the feedback :)

[suzebii2]

This fic started off on a good foot with me, as the mention of "2+2=5" automatically made me think of Radiohead.

Not that the rest of this reminded me of Radiohead, but it did maintain that brilliance all the way through. Witness;

Orlando was definitely all angles and curves. Hot curves that writhed in and out, concave and convex. Dom could see him, only hours earlier, all silk and muscles underneath him. Back arching up into a concave curve of its normal position, unsticking from the damp, wrenched-crooked sheets. Orlando’s taught stomach convexing into Dom’s. God yeah. Angles formed by arms and hipbones, hands and hardened need. Hot and sticky and meshed together, forming a grid of sex.

Brilliance! :D

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[qthelights]

Aww why thank you *g* I'm gald you liked it :)
Hee.. we're all full of flattery today aren't we? *g*

[mcee]

this fic is grate because:

1. it has dorli.
2. it has math, which i derived immense pleasure from in school until #3.
3. it has logarithms, which left me in the dust, where i watched my average in math go from 97% to 54%. but:
4. it has that other kind of math, the more visceral one, the one i have tattoo on my back.

lovely :)

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[qthelights]

hee! Thankyou :) As always, glad that you liked this. I always love feedback from the authors I love best :)

I too liked some parts of math :) I think algebra was my favourite part.. has a certain kind of *sense* about it to me..

but like dorli.. *that* makes sense to me.. mmmm
thanks darlin' *hugs*