RENEWAL (3/3)

[qrn]

Title: Renewal (3/3)
Author: qrn
Pairing: *you already know*
Rating: PG
Summary: All he wanted was to see a forgiving smile on the other’s face. Everything was perfect, until...
Author's Notes: Finally the last chapter... kicked myself last night for killing KiWoon & making all characters depressed. If you couldn't tell, I kinda drew inspiration from

Comments

[marieloffantasy]

Doojoonie!!! *cries forever* This was so depressing, and I actually cried while I read this part TT^TT *wipes eyes*
God, this was really good. Seriously. Fics that can make me cry usually mean their good fics, cuz I don't usually cry unless something really hits me emotionally. And wow, this one definitely got me.

I admire Jun for not going totally emo or insane after everything that has happened to him. It must take so much will power for him to make it each day. TT^TT But I guess somebody has to take care of Yoseobie. Sighhh, depressing DooSeob *sniff*
Maybe Hyunseung will wake up and Junnie can be happy again? *is trying to think happy thoughts*

Anyways this was good. I loved it. You made me cry. This was beautifully written. <3

[qrn]

Thank you so much for reading & commenting ^^
I'm glad you like it!
To be honest, I didn't really plan out the story or anything. It just kinda flows as I wrote it. I guess I must've been pretty emo when I started writing this fic T.T
Yeah, I have to say Junhyung is the one who suffers the most because of the whole thing.
A reader actually requested for Hyunnie's POV, but right now I'm still finishing KiWoon's side of the story.
Glad you liked it ^^

xoxo

[marnidoo]

I decided to look through your journal, and there's quite a lot of things! That's great! I'm gonna read some :)
This is pure angst, seriously! I don't have any word to say how I feel... You killed Kiwoon, really?! YOU KILLED THEM?! T___T
And Yoseob... Why can't he remember of Doojoon, just a little bit. That must be the worst thing ever, losing someone he loves except he's still there and he just doesn't know how much he used to love him anymore, and... *sobs*
Junseung. OMG. What did you do? You can't let them be that way. It hurts me so much, my poor OTP ending like this is cruel. How can you make Junhyung suffer so much? He has to pretend everyday that everything is fine so Yoseob can remember when he is actually destroyed by all that happened to them.

Whoa... It'll take me some time to get over it but I love the feeling. I do love angst (more than I should ^^) and you write it SO DAMN WELL!
This is insane to say but I love you for writing it! :D

[qrn]

Whoa dear, SO SORRY for the late reply!! My account settings didn't notify me of any new comments in old entries, so... yeah =( But it's all fixed now~

Yes, I killed KiWoon. And as you've probably read, I killed others, too.
I don't even know why I was this cruel to Jun T____T Poor guy...

Thanks, & I love you for reading it <3333

[locket_street]

OMG NOUUU doojoon you asshole QAQ You can't just leave junnie or seobbie or sungie like tat no you CAN'T!! QQAQQ
Gosh I'm getting overly emotional over this fic - I noe doojoon would be horribly guilty, but dude - junhyung is too D8 he can't just- leave them like that...can he? ;A;

well this much of angst got me all emo(in the touched way lol) tat my fren got pissed at me xD ty for such awesomeness ;w;

[qrn]

As expected, another death~~
Well, since Yoseob's condition was no longer cureable, Doojoon decided to end his life... I wonder if I would do the same thing if I was in his shoes =(

LOL. I send my apologies to your friend XD
Your welcome <3333

[namikaze_jkc]

DAMN IT I'M NOT SUPPOSED TO CRY IN THE LIBRARY!!! DOOJOON YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO FREAKING KILL YOURSELF!!
Wow, so emotional over fic. This isn't a first. Except it's the first time in school. =)) I'm such a masochist, wanting to read more of this. Thanks for writing this! :)

[qrn]

...Did you cry in the library?
See? Even my debut series is THIS depressing. Now you know how I ended up with Prisoners XD
Your welcome dear <333

[namikaze_jkc]

Uh.. *shifty eyes* Maybe?
Okay, okay I see. :)) I still love them all to bits though..