disappearing act (drabble)

[qiguai]

disappearing act
kis-my-ft2, yokoo/fujigaya, pg-13, 512w

Comments

[trappedintaipei]

What I was trying to get across was that Yokoo really can't resist him, or at least very soon he's going to break down and give in, though obviously I didn't do a good enough job of portraying that. (And really, who CAN resist that boy? Sigh.)

Hopefully I'll do better with the fic you requested for my challenge! \o/

[crazy_otaku911]

YOFUJIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII \o/

x: I am slightly confused at what's going on here BUT. ♥ It was still a good read. I love, love, love Fujigaya here. ♥ Also, at first I was a little ... ah, ?? over Yokoo? BUT! After talking it over with Kara (because we discuss all fics) I sort of came to realize that... it is also just a very different side of Yokoo that I just haven't really seen before. Fresh. 8) I like it.

(Though perhappppps a little more explanation of ... Yokoo as a whole? Like, your writing itself is really pretty and basically perfect so now it's about bringing the character essence out. Just a little bit more at the end to give you an idea of Yokoo's side. Because you laid out Fujigaya's story very well.))

So. IN SHORT.

Write me more. :| I demand it. (Especially if it is more of these two because I love them and I thinkkkk you would do absolutely fantabulous things with them as well.)

♥

[trappedintaipei]

After doing a read-over, I realize there's a LOT I could have added or explained better, so I'm sorry about that. XD This was one of those HOLYSHITIDEAMUSTWRITEITDOWN things, and I have to admit I've never been good at the... prettier stuff, but I try! \o/

I most definitely shall try again! \o/

[staypainted]

IF HE KNEW WHAT.

it pissed him off how hard he tried

I love this ):

[trappedintaipei]

lmao, OH YOU. Thank you. ♥

Also, I miss you. ): Come back to me. ): HUGS YOUR FACE. ):