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gwangchul October 26 2010, 04:28:52 UTC
Am I allowed to leave an obnoxiously long comment?

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trappedintaipei October 26 2010, 04:37:21 UTC
Of course! XD

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gwangchul October 26 2010, 04:39:30 UTC
I DON'T KNOW FIC CHALLENGE ETIQUETTE SO I HAD TO ASK, I'M SORRY ;___;

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trappedintaipei October 26 2010, 04:40:19 UTC
This is a pretty lax challenge so there is no need to worry, methinks. n___n

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zenfu October 26 2010, 04:31:16 UTC
SHRIEKS AND FLAILS

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staypainted October 26 2010, 05:59:00 UTC
lol Hyunmin. perfect Fred. Jihwan asleep sounds adorable

aww no be friends forever guys ): ):

"We'll always be together, Suhoon, and the Mystery Gang will always be a team." MY FACE RN ;___; how are you so great this scene omg

yesss I love backstory stuff so much. lol I can imagine them all in Injoon;s basement.

Hyunmin's ...vocal fidgeting.. is adorable ;~;

they all could do with eating some more burgers.

I really like how you write Injoon

why is Hyunmin watching Injoon what does he know that I don't!

wheee four hours stuck in a van with people who aren't talking. at least it's a van and not a squishy little car. well the car wouldn't be squishy the occupants would be squished.

what is the hope for HMMMM.

must've been a good message. or Suhoon is bipolar.

Hyunchul is so ~conniving~ idk if thats the word I want. Injoon is the one in the group with the subtly and grace of a panicked stampede best description ever ( ... )

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and the other part staypainted October 26 2010, 05:59:56 UTC

whaaaat Gwangchul lol convenient frequency malfunction how handy!

how does Gwangchul know where he is standing!

Injoon trusts him ;~; AMY STOP BEING PERFECT I CAN'T HANDLE MUCH MORE OF THIS

"Because you all didn't need me, and Jisang did." He takes Injoon's hand and squeezes it. All of Injoon's protests and possible other reactions get caught in his throat. "Someone had to wait for him, Injoon." With that, he pulls Injoon gently along with his as they continue their descent.

All Injoon can think to say is, "But you hate waiting..." in a minute I will have COMBUSTED from all the emptions I am feeling rn. also finding a thesaurus so I can use another word than PERFECTIONNN

Hunmin flailing on mats is an amazing mental image ty

After a moment of what appears to be incredibly deep thought, Hyunmin finishes crossing the room and stands directly next to his friend. He doesn't notice, but Injoon does as Jisang shuffles just slightly closer to Suhoon as well. Injoon looks pleadingly at Gwangchul, but he's too absorbed in observing the ( ... )

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Re: and the other part trappedintaipei October 30 2010, 00:02:15 UTC
Omg I can't believe it took me this long to reply, I'm sorry. ;______-;

I know I already said this, but I seriously enjoyed reading your reactions/comments than I enjoyed the fic itself. You are amazing. XD ♥

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Re: and the other part staypainted October 30 2010, 10:49:09 UTC
lol I am really glad I could amuse you with my ridiculousness~ :) ♥

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gwangchul October 26 2010, 06:06:33 UTC
i know i've read this before but the reason i never said anything worthy of my breath is that i wanted to make sure my comment was new and awesome here ;___;

okay i would just like to point out that suhoon being the one to always get kidnapped is so perfect i can't even like. i don't even need visuals because the images of that in my head are so clear.

the evil old men will always be named after kim kyeongwook lmao

He kisses Suhoon's forehead. "We'll always be together, Suhoon, and the Mystery Gang will always be a team."

A car pulls to a stop behind Suhoon with a squeak and they both recognize the grinding, ready-to-die-at-any-moment sound of Injoon's engine. Injoon looks between the two of them questioningly and Suhoon pushes Hyunmin's arms away.

"That's just it, Hyunmin. That isn't all that matters and we're not all together anymore," Suhoon says without looking at him. With that, he turns and climbs into the van.tears ;___; you write their awkward not-fights so perfectly ( ... )

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gwangchul October 26 2010, 06:07:05 UTC
Jihwan stops Injoon when he starts to leave at three in the morning. Hyunchul is snoozing in one of the two beds, so he pulls Injoon outside and shifts nervously from foot to foot. "Are you going to meet Gwangchul tomorrow morning?" Injoon's face must betray his surprise because Jihwan immediately looks concerned. "Please tell me you won't go."

He feels guilty because he knows Suhoon probably could use someone to talk to, but somehow Injoon can sense that that someone isn't himself. Rather than feel like an intruder in his own room, he grabs his bag and heads for the motel room door. Just before leaving, though, he makes a bold attempt, throwing subtlety out the window, "Who do you keep texting?" His voice is barely audible, but he knows Suhoon hears him.

"I'd tell you if the answer were something important," is all Suhoon says.sobs i know too much ( ... )

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gwangchul October 26 2010, 06:08:10 UTC
"Do you find me suspicious?" Suhoon asks with an amused smile. "We've been friends for years and yet we can't trust each other with a few secrets?" Hyunchul doesn't answer.

"Were you with someone?" Hyunmin asks weakly. Suhoon half-turns in surprise and frowns a little.

"Yes."

Hyunmin lets out a strangled laugh before continuing, "Who?"

There's a pause and Injoon watches as Suhoon stares straight ahead, deep in thought. "You'll find out soon. Just wait a little longer, okay?" No one agrees, but Suhoon takes the silence as his answer and enters his and Injoon's room.

EVEN THOUGH I KNOW THINGS I RAGED WHY IS SUHOON SUCH A LITTLE OFIEHFPW HYUNMIN'S LIFE.

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gwangchul October 26 2010, 06:08:31 UTC
"Makes traveling easier." He can't help but stare as Gwangchul stretches out across the entirety of the seat, the definition of relaxation. "Who the hell let you teach?" he asks, shocked at his own informality. It doesn't phase Gwangchul, who folds his arms behind his head and smiles.

wangchul sighs. "You have a point." He looks at Injoon with a lopsided grin. "I couldn't help myself. I don't do this with just anyone."

Feeling the color rise to his face despite himself, Injoon leans over the back of his seat to dig under Gwangchul's seat.

Gwangchul takes the joint back and smirks. "Always the dedicated pot-head."

Injoon frowns through the growing cloud of smoke between them. "Like you're one to talk. You gave me my first joint, after all."

"Excuse you, I haven't done this in a year." A smirk spreads across his face and he gives Injoon a half-lidded stare that makes his hair stand on end. "We had plenty of firsts together, huh?" ((((((THAT WASN'T THERE BEFORE SCREAMS!!!!!)))

The joint suddenly manifests itself in front of his ( ... )

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kebing October 26 2010, 14:18:31 UTC
"We've all changed- him, me, you. I only want to be with one person, the one who was there for me no matter what. The one I know won't disappear because he promised me he wouldn't."

CRYYYYYIIINNNNGGGG OH MY GOD WRITING THIS MUST HAVE BEEN A BITTER BATTLE OF OTP'S

kjdfhkdfhg Amy this was great if I had more time I would leave an epicly long comment full of all the things I loved about it as well cause this fic deserves a whole bunch of epicly long comments because it is great and it tugged at my heartstrings and all that good stuff ;A;

I AM SO HAPPY YOU WROTE THIS OMG THE WHOLE SCOOBY DOO MOTIF WORKS SO WELL FOR THEM T________T

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trappedintaipei October 26 2010, 20:27:34 UTC
YOU INSPIRED THIS WHOLE THING~ n________n I am so glad you liked it! Scooby Doo fic is so much fun I wish I could do more!

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