[Kai_Victoria] Give Me Your Heart, PG-13, Oneshot

[qian_xin]

Pairing: Victoria Song Qian x Kai Kim Jongin
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, AU!, Romance
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine but the writing.
Summary: This is a story of chance; they live in a world in which Kai is seriously sick and Victoria is extremely twisted, but none of this matters because what really makes the difference is how Kai grows out of it and

Comments

[stars_in_love]

I KNEW YOU WOULD FLIP THAT KINDA SHIT. I KNEW SHE WAS THE ONE WHO GAVE HER HEART.

XUE, YOU EVIL EVIL BEING.

From the very beginning my lip was trembling because caaaatttt ;A;
This is such a beautiful ship and I'm really glad that you write it ^-^ IT SHOULD BE WRITTEN MORE SERIOUSLY.

Anyways, the story. I liked that you kept Victoria in a sort of shadow. I was dying to know about her, but at the same time it kind of emitted her personality. Did that sentence make sense? I hope it made sense okay. Although, I was slightly confused at the switching between Kai and Jongin and Victoria and Song Qian? It wasn't really explained and I couldn't pick out a significant contrast between who Kai is and who Jongin is T^T

But ofnifgnfjgdkfjgksjfghkjfhg I liked how you wrote Kai! I never see many people right him as vulnerable and stuff so that was quite new ^-^ I started pulling out the tissues when he talked about wanting to be a dancer tho :c JONGIN YOU CAN DO IT.

All in all, a really nice Kaitoria~! BOBOS OF ADMIRATION.

And to your AN... you know what I will say. Kristoria 5ever okay well actually changtoria is 6ever but

[qian_xin]

XDDD
Yes, kittens are the very core of my evil being. lol. And yes, Kaitoria needs to be written more often ;___;

And there really was no significance to the use of the name Kai lol. I was just too lazy to actually describe him out before I used his real name, which I just somehow found more suitable, and so I used Kai because there's already an image attached to his stage name that people can visualize. Just me being lazy. lol. Victoria and Song Qian though was mostly because Kai doesn't learn Victoria's full real name until the end of the story; he only got to hear her first name "Qian" for the first time from that one nurse, and that was it. So for Victoria, I mostly just used Victoria.

And yay~ I actually had Luhan in mind for this story at first, but Kai seemed more suited for the role after a while of waiting. I'm sure you can see the Luhan-ish traits in Kai's character, lol.

THANK YOU!

I must be missing out on something? Why is Kristoria 5ever and Changtoria 6ever? lol. ;A; I hate when I don't understand references, but I'm just so disconnected sometimes. So much love to you!!♥

[stars_in_love]

haha, noo it wasn't really a reference to anything, it's just because like "4ever" and 5ever is bigger than 4ever? it's often used in fandom to describe an otp you really love. i'm basically saying i really like kristoria, and i like changtoria more ^-^ sorry if there was confusion orz

[qian_xin]

Ohhhh lol.
So your ultimate OTP for Victoria is with Changmin? Hehe ^_^ Didn't know that!

[stars_in_love]

'tis u___u