Demon Eyes

[qafan]

Ok, this is my next entry for the brigits_flame challenge for week two.

Week 2 Prompt: Demons

Title: Demon Eyes

Author's note: Right, so since the prompts sort of go hand in hand, I decided to explore the world of  "Dark Angels" a bit more. However, this introduces a whole new character: Nathanael. I've had him on my mind for a few days, and only

Comments

[foreverbm]

This is good!

You really got into Nathans feelings despair and loss and I could imagine and feel his pain as I read it.

[qafan]

Thank you! I have had his character in mind for a few days, and haven't been able to completely shape him until I sat down tonight to write. I think I'm pleased with how this turned out. At least, I like how he is shaping up. I definitely plan to develop him more.

Thanks for commenting! And thanks for the encouragement! Much love, my dear. ;)

[foreverbm]

I will watch for your next update on this story :) and look forward to seeing where you take him

[qafan]

hehe yay! I'll definitely be using LJ as a sounding board on it. Did you read the other one as well? Dark Angels? That has the background of not only Nathanael, but his entired family. (I don't name Nathanael in that one - mainly because I've just named him tonight - but he is Gabriel's son)

[foreverbm]

I intend to go back and find that one later tonight, I have to get dinner organized because I'm working tonight. Will check it out and leave you my thoughts then :)

LJ is a good sounding board I think!

[qafan]

Great sounds like a plan! I'll chat with you later on then. It's like midnight here, and I'm getting pretty tired! Have a great afternoon/evening/whatever it is! Don't work too hard!