Ibiza (Chapter 1/9)

[amaranthink]

 Title: Ibiza (Chapter 1/9)
Fandom: QAF (US)
Pairing: Brian/Justin
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Canon-friendly AR
Timeline: Episode 408
Disclaimer: I don't own any of this.  All characters belong to Cowlip and Showtime.  I make no money from any of this.
Summary: What would have happened if Brian had told Justin about his cancer and taken him to Johns Hopkins

Comments

oh i love it!

[crazyevildru]

i really like this version because justin can actually HELP! more soon! I love it

Re: oh i love it!

[amaranthink]

Thanks for reading. Yes, Justin will help but Brian won't make it easy. More in a couple days.

[peripety]

I enjoyed this! It was nice to read a "what should have happened" of that scene - I always found it so sad that Brian shut Justin out.

[amaranthink]

Glad you are enjoying it. The way the story was written was very "Brian" but I just didn't like it. More soon.

[mickiebg]

This was very well written and I enjoyed your entire premise and point of view. It was all very believable, its too bad the idiots at Cowlip didn't use this version. It makes much more sense then what they did.

Thank you for sharing this. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories!

[amaranthink]

I can see why Cowlip wrote it the way they did but I didn't like it. That's what is so great about fanfic - we can rewrite it the way we want. Thanks for reading. Update in a couple days.

[xanister]

Good start to a very promising fic. At first I was a little wary of Brian being so open but you wrote it very well and kept true to the character. Good job, keep it coming.

[amaranthink]

Thanks for the compliment. In order to make this work, I had to make Brian open up a little bit but I really am trying to stay true to OS Brian. He hasn't totally rolled over, though. He will continue to try to push Justin away. Next chapter in a couple days.

[xanister]

I love that saying "hasn't totally rolled over."

I understand the need to have him open up some, and you pulled it off well with the pushing away at the same time. Can't wait to read the next chapter :)

[devotedfan]

I love your version of what happened after Brian told Justin he was going to
Ibiza. Justin just wants to be a loving and supportive partner he shouldn't
have been kept from the truth. Brian has enough going on dealing with the surgery
and the possibility of testicular cancer he really doesn't need the added stress
of trying to hide it from everyone he loves.Brian needs to understand that Justin
wants to be there for him because he loves not pities Brian.

[amaranthink]

Exactly. Brian hates pity (it makes his dick soft). Justin will teach Brian what it means to be partners. More soon. Thanks for reading.