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THE WINDOW OF MY MIND

Apr 14, 2007 17:18

Title: The Window of My Mind
Written By: gaeln
Timeline: Post 513
Rating: R
What if: Justin was there
Warning: Justin as silent observer so, consequently, heavy on Justin’s inner thoughts and light on actual dialogue but it's fairly short and vaguely AU.
Author's Notes: Maybe this ‘what if’ has been done to death but I’ve only read one so…thanks once ( Read more... )

Comments 44

bodleian April 14 2007, 13:47:42 UTC

The stories that I have read so far tonight have been excellent and yours is no exception. I really liked hearing Justin's thoughts and I loved the ending. You put the boys right where I wanted them to be.
Thank-you.

gaeln April 23 2007, 20:27:55 UTC

Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for taking the time to comment.

Thank you reader1 April 14 2007, 16:48:54 UTC

For correcting the error of the canon ways. How satisfying this ending would have been! This would really have been the "boys to men" story for Brian and Justin. Thanks for writing and posting. S

Re: Thank you gaeln April 23 2007, 20:30:12 UTC

I'm glad you found my ending credible and satisfying, that was my goal, to right a terrible, terrible wrong, thanks for commenting.

singlewoman April 14 2007, 19:07:59 UTC

I really enjoyed reading Justin's POV. it must have been a bit overwhelming for everyone who was present at the bombing to walk back into Babylon when it re-opened. And thank you for having Justin actually attend the re-opening, as if he would have stayed away.

gaeln April 23 2007, 20:33:23 UTC

No way he would have stayed away but I have to have to imagine it would be a little intimidating especially with everything else that's been done to him. Glad you like my version and thank you for commenting.

damietta April 14 2007, 21:33:19 UTC

I liked that Brian was kind to the guys that came up on the platform with him. Maturity makes Brian even more beautiful. I agree with sdrichey, this truly would have been the "boys to men" ending.

gaeln April 23 2007, 20:39:55 UTC

I think as time went on Justin's empathy towards others would reflect in Brian's behavior, if only a little, making him more aware at least. Thanks for your comment and I have to agree, maturity would only make Brian more beautiful with Justin by his side.

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gaeln April 23 2007, 20:42:15 UTC

I guess I thought so because I heard of a challenge on this "what if?" but hadn't actually read anything from it. I'm very glad you enjoyed this and thank you for commenting.