Entry #28 - "Tell Me Again"

[severina2001]

Title: Tell Me Again
Written By: luceononuro
Timeline: Post Season Five
Rating: NR
Warnings: None
Genre: Angst, Romance

Comments

[happier_bunny]

OMG...that was beautiful. I think I've been waiting 5 years for someone to address in such a realistic and beautiful way Brian's fear of being loved and that he deals with it by trying to make sure everyone's taken care of . And then you top it off with Justin's COMPLETE understanding of it through a conversation.

I lean my head against the door, I don’t know where to go from here, but the words seem to spill out of me somehow. “It’s not all about need Brian, it’s about give, and take. It’s about balance. You’ve never had steady. You were never able to count on anyone, so you want to keep giving what you think I need as if that’s the only way you will hold this relationship together. That’s not love Brian, that’s fear. Fear of being left alone, of not being loved, of not being worth it.”

This paragraph...wow..guh...brilliant. When I found out who you are, you will have made a friend for life. ;)

[happier_bunny]

ok, clearly in my excitement, I miss typed...that should be when I 'find'..not found. hee

[queenydiva]

Yeah, what she said.

[luceononuro]

Thank-you

♥

[epicallytired]

this is brilliant
I’ve gone from wanting to kill him to wanting to heal him in ten minutes. I may not survive this man

and the rest of it...i have twenty four chapters and counting of a story that is trying to get across what you did in a couple of paragraphs and for that i will worship you and never forgive you.

[luceononuro]

I have cut this out and will carry it in my wallet - that's how much I appreciated it.

♥

[sixpackokittens]

beautiful... I love mature Justin and vulnerable Brian.

*wails* these are all sooooo good! how are we suppose to vote?!?

[luceononuro]

I haven't read them all yet - but will make every effort to do so. And you're right, the stories I've read so far were excellent.

Your feedback - and your username - make me smile :)

[sixpackokittens]

glad to make you smile :) mind if I friend you for future stories?

[luceononuro]

Please do!!!

this was not one of my better stories :P

lot's of porn and angst await you, if you dare to delve into my other stuff ;)

I would be very pleased to be your friend

♥

[shadownyc]

This was so beautiful and deeply touching. I'm actually a bit choked up right now.

"Justin."

"Yeah?"

"Tell me again." Perfect!!!

The imagery of their backs simultaneously against the bedroom door from both sides was excellent.

[luceononuro]

If I was going to write it again, I would play the door up more - thanks for picking that out.

*smooches you*

[negativeerin]

This was so, so excellent. It's the first entry I've read. I have no idea why I was drawn to it by title alone but it nearly feels fated. I doubt I'll read another this good, I feel like it really and truly spoke to the prompt and did the characters so much justice. Thanks for the wonderful read, whoever you may be...

[luceononuro]

Of course I seriously had a fit when I saw this feedback - and I know that you went on to read the rest of the stories and I'm sure you found others you enjoyed - but for that one brief shining moment you really liked this one, and I love that.

♥

[negativeerin]

I did enjoy a few others, but this was really really excellent! It was such a perfect entry to read first!