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Entry #02 - Blank Canvas (1 of 3)

Apr 18, 2006 17:45

Title: Blank Canvas, part 1
Written By: ayesakara
Timeline: Post Season 5
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Genre: Angst, romance

( Blank Canvas, part 1 )

Comments 18

luciblue April 19 2006, 03:37:49 UTC

AHHH. who knows brooklyn so well?
this is creeping me out.

but its good, nonetheless.

ayesakara May 2 2006, 15:47:19 UTC

Ah, the wonders of googling! I love researching for a fic! That is half the fun to me! :)

Glad you enjoyed!

1daftpunk April 19 2006, 06:45:15 UTC

Jane 2005 is my guess.

ayesakara May 2 2006, 15:50:24 UTC

I believe Jane is a New Yorker, so I'll take that as a compliment. :D

seanmegansean April 19 2006, 13:57:15 UTC

I like it very much. I can rule out some writers (much too Brian-friendly for some) but let's see what the next part brings :D

The "angst" in the genre freaks me out a bit. So far I am really pleased Brian showed up in NY first - him not doing that is pretty much the worst post-513 angst scenario for me.

ayesakara May 2 2006, 15:54:09 UTC

I am really pleased Brian showed up in NY first - him not doing that is pretty much the worst post-513 angst scenario for me.

That and Justin losing all contact with Brian after moving to NY. I find that very OOC too and simply refuse to accept such a scenario in my fangirly B/J-forever mentality! I want my B/J together! :)

seanmegansean May 2 2006, 18:50:26 UTC

simply refuse to accept such a scenario in my fangirly B/J-forever mentality! I want my B/J together!

Most squee-worthy thing I heard all day!!! Consequently...

*squees for fangirly B/J forever mentality*;)

ayesakara May 2 2006, 19:02:10 UTC

///squees with you///

:X

asm614 April 20 2006, 07:32:11 UTC

You mentioned Penn State. You have stolen my heart (Class of 2005 right here, lol). How I wish Daph had been there with me, lol.

Loving this so far, and can't wait for more... I'll perhaps make an author guess when I get to the end, but I have an idea... maybe...

ayesakara May 2 2006, 15:56:06 UTC

YAY! Glad you enjoyed. :X :X :X

Part One camlaw April 21 2006, 06:55:46 UTC

Not quite sure why this story has began like this, but am very intrigued to follow it through.

LOVE the West Indian character. My father is West Indian, from Grenada. I can totally relate to the inability for some to understanding the West Indian accent. If I have been away too long from my Granny I get a little confused myself.

I always thought that the QAF community was too homogenized. Hee hee hee.

Re: Part One ayesakara May 2 2006, 16:00:27 UTC

Oh, I can't tell you how much I love you for loving that characater. He just came to me at the right time when I was thinking of where to place Justin in NY. I am so happy you can relate to the language problems. I found some AMAZING websites that traslate/transliterate West Indian English to normal English... and some of the translations were downright hilarious. At least to me. I just had to put this idea in the story. I thought it just worked. I am glad you enjoyed it. :)