Entry #07 - "Essence"

[severina2001]

Title: Essence
Written By: darksylvia
Timeline: Sometime after season 4
Rating: NC-17/mature
Warnings: Nothing major
Genre Drama

Comments

[damietta]

I loved this.

All of the metaphors of the clock (it is only time) and the bunker of Brian's soul were very well done.

I liked how you took snippets of canon (Brian's photography was implied, but alas not explored there) and weaved it into a very vital parts of Brian's anatomy.

Justin processing that he was invited into Brian's life now was interesting. He read Brian perfectly.

Quite a optimistic story! Thank you!

Deb

[darksylvia]

Oh, thank you! As the first person to review, you are especially awesome anyway, but you reviewed so satisfyingly!

True story: the metaphors came out completely under my radar. I didn't notice them until the end :D

[zosha2003]

amazingly beautiful

[darksylvia]

Thank you!

[iamz]

"If I can find them," Brian said dismissively. And he would, Justin knew, if there were a distinct lack of blow jobs proportional to the lack of photos. "

That line there explains all the awesomeness that there was. Beautiful imagery, and very accurate representations of Brian and Justin.

[darksylvia]

Heh, thanks. Justin is crafty. I'm glad you liked how I see Brian and Justin.

[spuzz]

I loved this one, the way Brian acted was just...so perfect in everyway. And I loved the idea of this secret place of his, and Justin's reactions to it.

And the ending line was lovely.

[darksylvia]

YAY. Thank you!

[jule1122]

What a great way to have Brian invite Justin into his past by making it a physical place. I like to see them open up to each other.

[darksylvia]

Thank you! It was the only way I could imagine Brian opening up enough :D He's so action oriented!