Who wants to beta the first chapter of my crazy mpreg? ...I want LOTS of betas, so plz volunteer kthx? 8D;;
...Please do a better job that
wowy319.
wowy319 (4:21:49 AM): It's intriguing
wowy319 (4:22:28 AM): The characters are both done in the right manner, which is good
wowy319 (4:22:59 AM): You did a good job writing them
wowy319 (4:23:00 AM): ^_^
pyro_edward (4:24:01 AM): CRIT PLZ.
wowy319 (4:24:15 AM): I can't find much to criticise
pyro_edward (4:25:08 AM): Well, find something? :'D
wowy319 (4:25:15 AM): I'm tryin;
wowy319 (4:27:10 AM): I'm sorry, but I'm afraid your fanfic is... well-written. There's no cure known to writerkind, I'm afraid.
pyro_edward (4:28:18 AM): ...Damn.
...Nah, just kiddin'. I love ya, bud. xD