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Pairings: Auron / Lulu
Rating: 18+ sexual content
Disclaimer: I didn't make the characters, the game or the places... I also didn't make any money.
*Auron Spoliers*
I had some problems posting this before... so I deleted the last entry and posted it again!
I give you my first FFX fanfic:.( Perspective )
Rating: 18+ sexual content
Disclaimer: I didn't make the characters, the game or the places... I also didn't make any money.
*Auron Spoliers*
I had some problems posting this before... so I deleted the last entry and posted it again!
I give you my first FFX fanfic:.( Perspective )
No probs. I think we all need a little review sometimes, esp. if it's a fic that's been needlessly ignored.
Yeah, Auron is all about the thoughtful "hmmmms" etc. I swear to god he's like "goddamityoufuckingignoranttwatmonkeys" whenever he says "Hmmm" or "intersting."
Honeyed desire indeed! I've written something sexy for my chaptered fic, less outright PW/OP or even PWP, and more... well, let me paste this. Tell me what you think. This is Rikku x Gippal.
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Some strange emotion gripped her body when she looked up at him to thank him for looking out for her again like when they were little, and she suddenly found herself kissing him hard, fingers tangling in his spiky hair. She was kissing him, and surprisingly, despite what must have been an awful taste of vomit, was being kissed back. Fingers fumbled at buckles, and there was clothing on the floor and he was so close and so warm, making her gut squeeze tight and shivery... a feeling that hadn't been inside her for way too damn long, she thought.
The feeling had last twisted inside her when she'd cornered the red-headed Blitzer in the airship a few years ago. There were abstract remembrances of other partners that crossed her mind but there hadn't been anyone special since the heated moments of making the well-muscled Yevonite man curse his own god. This was special, even though it was all nails and angry hot words hissed quietly in her native language. It was him, her partner in crime from her youth, moving over her, hands crawling along her shoulders, grazing her neck, his mouth fastened along her jaw.
“Rikku,” the single word had come out, hard-edged and desperate. She pulled off his eye-patch, looking at the broken glory that was his damaged eye and cried out, fingers digging into his shoulder as he pushed her away from the memories of yesterday and fully into here and now.
“Bastard,” she spat, as her breath ripped from her, his teeth biting into her neck deeply. Her ribs jutted out over her flat stomach, meeting his scarred chest evenly as she arched into him, the solid mattress, chilly, beneath her body. He chuckled deep in his chest, and slid between her bare thighs, skin scraping softly over skin with a low rasping noise.
“You love it.”
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~_^
The first sentence reads weird, I think it's because of the use of "looking" twice, maybe "to thank him for watching out for her again" would straighten it out?
I like the reflection on how she broke Wakka, very nice! "making the well-muscled Yevonite man curse his own god. " Just lovely!
Enjoying the image created by grazing her neck, his mouth fastened along her jaw *purr* Also liking:broken glory
I like the feeling to this, it seems much stronger right at the very end, the last paragraph holds more passion than the others.
I'll definately have a read of the whole thing when you're done if you'll permit it!
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Yes, I think I'm going to write an off-shoot called "Breaking Wakka" or something like that. Shivery shiver goodness.
This is actually from the third chapter of my Necrosis Infinitum fic, and that's about as far as it goes. It cuts to a different scene at that point. Thanks for your comments on broken glory, I'm in love with that line too.
It is being posted on FF.Net... don't want to scare the children.
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Have you heard Pink's song: Like a Pill. ?
It's totaly Rikku's point of view if her and Auron ever (Yevon forbid) did something. Everytime I hear it I picture her breaking down through the following neglect. Maybe it's just me... but I thought I'd share!
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I'm becoming a (closet) Aurrikku fan. It's horrible, I know.
Like a Pill... I'm gonna have to write a fic on that. :\ You're evil. Giving me more ideas.
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Now Auron is no real challenge to me, he and I are oddly on-par with thought processes, despite what I'm like on here, I'm pretty much silent in the real world. I also possess that cynical eye and dark vision. ^-^
I must be allowed to aid you in some way on that fic! Use me as a idea board if you wish. :)
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