[fanfiction] - More Sci-Fi for the discerning reader.

[purpleicicles]

The Bureau for the Investigation of Technology Crimes was known internationally as the pinnacle of crime prevention organizations. It employed the best programmers, hackers, detectives and scientists to detect and catch criminals who wanted to use technology or biology in ways disapproved of by international law. It’s agents served to

Comments

[laurose8]

Thank you for another chapter. I love your Sanzo! BITC is also a great anagram. (Just pointing out it's means it is, the possessive is 'its'. This is due to the Get Icicles League.)

Very good, how Gojyo mistakes Hakkai's proposition. Also I love rickety clothes-horses displaying Gojyo’s appal[l]ing taste in underwear.

(Excuse me. To me, in the paragraph starting "Yes, yes,", it's not clear who speaks afterward. And I think more of a scene break would be a bit clearer.)