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[pumpkingoth]

Since it was made so perfectly honest to me your thought let me clear something up on my last post. Chris knows I've been on here, I fact he told me I could get on here to say hi to you all. We talk all the time and I know exactly what the circumstances to him leaving were. I'm sorry if me being on here upset anyone who used to, or still is,

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[avi_dragon]

and please, if you want people to understand what you are trying to say to them, you might want to take some elementary grammar lessons por ejemple ("for example" in spanish, in case you were wondering):

you original post:
Since it was made so perfectly honest to me your thought let me clear something up on my last post. Chris knows I've been on here, I fact he told me I could get on here to say hi to you all. We talk all the time and I know exactly what the circumstances to him leaving were. I'm sorry if me being on here upset anyone who used to, or still is, friends with Chris. I was only trying to say hi to the people that were a part of his life in California.

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Since your thoughts were made so perfectly clear to me, let me clear something up in regards to my last post. Chris knows I've been on here; [ed. note: the semicolon is just for flavor, you could have used a period here as well] in fact, he told me I could get on here to say hi to you all. [ed note: technically, you should not say "you all," but since you are from Oklahoma, and this isn't a term paper, I won't correct it.] We talk all the time, and I know exactly what the circumstances surrounding his leaving were. I'm sorry if my posting here upset anyone who used to be, or still is, friends with Chris. I was only trying to say hi to the people who were a part of his life in California.

As I said in a previous post in my own journal: at least Chris found someone who makes him feel smart. I know that's difficult, but you seem to be doing a fine job of it.