Strawberry (Harry/Ginny, PG-13)

[pumpkin_fics]

Title: Strawberry
Author: pumpkinpasty @ pumpkin_fics
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1020
Disclaimer: Harry Potter's not mine. He's JKR's. And that's a good thing, too. No copyright infringement intended. :)
Summary: She tries to forget. He tries to remember. Neither can.
Notes: Written a form that might resemble a series of drabbles, if I was picky about things like word

Comments

[pumpkin_fics]

Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, and that you caught the detached feeling. :)

[pokie4389]

Aw! So lovely! I loved how all the simple things reminded them of each other. Lovely job!

[pumpkin_fics]

Thank you -- I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[aggiebell90]

I agree; it's beautiful. I think the style reflects their feelings so well. I love how the two of them are doing the same things but opposite (or maybe for opposite reasons?) throughout the story, at least until the end (and if that makes any sense at all, I'll be shocked!). Harry's looking at the sky thinking of Ginny, and she's purposely *not* looking at the sky so she doesn't think of him...

Okay, I am totally not making any sense at all here. I love the dichotomy of it, I guess. At least until the end, where they've both collected something that reminds them of the other, and they've both stopped pretending.

And I really, really like the symbolism of the rain at the end, cleansing them both.

Excellent job.

[pumpkin_fics]

Oh, no, you've made perfect sense! I'm so glad that you caught onto the dichotomy of this, and that you thought the sort-of fragmented style fits them here.

Thank you so much for your review! It made my day. :)

[ex_magicalw]

This is so so so beautiful.

[pumpkin_fics]

Thank you! :)

[humanminute]

That was beautiful. Seriously, wonderful job.

[pumpkin_fics]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I am in love with that icon, haha.