Wee! Read My Crappy Thing!
Here's something I just finished.. Of course I don't like it but comment and tell me what you think:
Trapped in a place that nobody sees
Trapped in a world of reality
All your hopes, dreams, and fears
They all come true and collide here
Cornered in the open nude as those first breaths
Ignored as everyone watches
Consider temptation when you know the outcome
Miserably suffering you’re so self-centered
Lies, deception, thanks to you
Slice deeper in your side to get you through
Wounded body crumples to the bedroom floor
No one wants you to live anymore
A sliver of life still lingers as Daddy comes home for once
Blood seeps through his cold fingers
Look in his eyes what do you see
A compassion that you thought never could be
With second thoughts your heart stops