I'm trying to think of words to arrange into sentences that find themselves morphing into paragraphs to even BEGIN to express how much I enjoyed reading this, but I'm having some troubles. I'm just shocked it has four comments, and half of them are your replies. A fic written this great deserves a standing ovation.
I love your Liam/Louis so much. You write them both so well and throwing them into an high school AU just really brought out your skill and ease in their dynamic.
Can I just say that I should have seen this coming, but OHMYGOD when the note fell out of Louis' bag I think I had a heart attack. And Liam!!! was so upset!!! but was willing to contain his feelings!!!! for Louis' sake!!!!! AHHHHHH and THEN when Louis thinks Andy (cleverly inserted as the antagonist might I add) hit him back, and he ran into a LOCKER instead was the best part! I JUST DON'T KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE WHAT MY FEELINGS ARE DOING. It just felt like such a /Liam/ thing like it would only happen to him and you captured that and my poor Lilo heart.
Now is usually the moment where I add in bits from the fic that I adored and fawn over them even more, but there are so many of those bits, I'll comment again when I reread this. So, so good.
Thank you for posting!! Really incredible job. (Sorry I'm shit at comments.)
oh goodness, thank you so much! and don't apologize, this is a lovely comment -- i really appreciate you taking the time to say such kind things. thank you again, and i'm glad you enjoyed it!
I love your Liam/Louis so much. You write them both so well and throwing them into an high school AU just really brought out your skill and ease in their dynamic.
Can I just say that I should have seen this coming, but OHMYGOD when the note fell out of Louis' bag I think I had a heart attack. And Liam!!! was so upset!!! but was willing to contain his feelings!!!! for Louis' sake!!!!! AHHHHHH and THEN when Louis thinks Andy (cleverly inserted as the antagonist might I add) hit him back, and he ran into a LOCKER instead was the best part! I JUST DON'T KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE WHAT MY FEELINGS ARE DOING. It just felt like such a /Liam/ thing like it would only happen to him and you captured that and my poor Lilo heart.
Now is usually the moment where I add in bits from the fic that I adored and fawn over them even more, but there are so many of those bits, I'll comment again when I reread this. So, so good.
Thank you for posting!! Really incredible job. (Sorry I'm shit at comments.)
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