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puddleshark

Nov 11, 2022 17:13

Pines murmur. In pools
The moon shivers as she bathes,
Under winter stars.

Comments 4

sartorias November 11 2022, 20:04:32 UTC

Lovely images--especially that first line, sound AAND sight!

puddleshark November 12 2022, 15:30:25 UTC

Thank you!

seekerval November 12 2022, 23:09:56 UTC

Very evocative. Definitely makes me see the moon shivering as the puddle's surface ripples. I like this one very much. Indeed!

puddleshark November 13 2022, 13:34:38 UTC

Thank you. I wanted to write a haiku about the west wind without mentioning the west wind, if that makes sense...