Gift fic for b_akakame: Close Encounters With Mars

Sep 15, 2014 18:14

Title: Close Encounters With Mars
Written for: b_akakame
Pairing: Akame
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~10,300
Disclaimer: All of this is fiction.
Note: This story can also be read at the Archive of Our Own.
Warnings: None
Author’s Notes: To my recipient-hope you enjoy!
Summary: Two singers walk into a concert, and one of them says to the other…

Close Encounters With Mars )

akanishi jin/kamenashi kazuya, 2014 fic

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solo September 28 2014, 15:12:59 UTC
That's a really cool story! I love how you make everything work with canon, and their bickering sounds so real. Also great how Jin keeps insisting and won't let Kame get away.

He does have stuff to do tomorrow, though it’s not exactly early-but he wasn’t planning on an all-night drinking session, which is what these things often seem to turn into. And he definitely wasn’t planning on an all-night Jin session either. (Which is the other thing they sometimes turn into.)

Apart from the lovely rhetoric, this really intrigued me because it was an early indication that there was an ongoing thing between them, even though everything else pointed in another direction.

“The shower was a very good idea.”
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“The shower was a very bad idea,”

LOL. This reader thinks the shower was an excellent idea. It was a 'hot' shower. :)

Every time something big happens in your life, I end up hearing about it on freaking Mezamashi.”

Oh Kame, I HEAR YOU!

I like how you dealt with that, and how the whole issue got resolved. Feels gooooooood! :D

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frameofmind6 October 12 2014, 03:17:52 UTC
Thank you!! ;)

Also great how Jin keeps insisting and won't let Kame get away.

Yeah, Kame is a bit slippery-Jin has to be sticky if he wants to hang onto him… ;)

Apart from the lovely rhetoric, this really intrigued me because it was an early indication that there was an ongoing thing between them, even though everything else pointed in another direction.

Thanks! I didn’t want to get stuck on explaining their relationship up front, but I didn’t want it coming out of nowhere either. Very glad the hints came across.

LOL. This reader thinks the shower was an excellent idea. It was a 'hot' shower. :)

\o/ (Jin will most likely agree eventually, once his wallet finishes drying out. And until then, he’ll probably just make Kame pay for things… ;)

I like how you dealt with that, and how the whole issue got resolved. Feels gooooooood! :D

Yaaaay! I’m really glad to hear that-glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the comment!

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