Fic Pinstripes & Jacquard ‘Verse, Chapter 20: It’s Not My Time

Mar 09, 2012 00:28


Title: Pinstripes & Jacquard ‘Verse, Chapter 20: It’s Not My Time
Author: psyfi_geekgirl 
BetaBabe: akkajemo
Characters/Pairings: Twelfth Doctor, Jack, River, the Master
Rating: PG-13
Excerpt: “What have you done?” she croaked, her voice raspy, from the grave.
Word count: 4,405
Disclaimer: Until she’s Jossed, Twelve is mine-but of course, based entirely on stuff that ain’t ( Read more... )

the master, jack, twelfth doctor, river

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smokeydoggy March 10 2012, 04:41:02 UTC
what was great about this chapter was how it made so much sense.
the sonic. why Ten didn't take it. How ten was driven to be the Valeyard. The Master was also totally perfect.
I don't think we'll Moffet will bring out a dark doctor quite yet -- he already has enough irons in the fire what with the Silence, the Library. Still, Amy's Choice was written by Moffett's wife, and the Dream Lord is just another name for Valeyard.
I guess it depends upon how long Moffett wants to stay was showrunner. He might be thinking of a Twelve Doctor storyline.
At one point I thought he would have the eleventh doctor deposit that life into the Library (somehow he is going to join River in the Library -- and I think Rory and Amy too). this would make his twelve self more prone to going dark.
Another idea is that he is going to cure the Lonely God persona by being able to visit River in the Library (you can't tell my sexy couldn't do it), this I think would make him happier and less likely to go dark.
I was watching Gridlock the other day, Moffett is right, the Doctor has to get away from such angst and unhappiness.
Who knows what Moffett is going to do. This is a great time to be a Who fan.
I love you story

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psyfi_geekgirl March 10 2012, 09:00:23 UTC
Oh, YAY! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
This was one of my beta's favorites, too.
I'm chuffed that you like how it's tying together.
Thanks for the support!

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