Fic: Girl In The Mirror 'Verse: Chapter 17: Ghost in the Machine

[psyfi_geekgirl]

Title: Girl In The Mirror ‘Verse, Chapter 17: Ghost in the Machine
Author: psyfi_geekgirl  
BetaBabe: akkajemo 
Characters/Pairings: Twelfth Doctor, Jack, Martha/Mickey + OC
Rating: PG-13
Excerpt: Over by the computer terminals, Stefanie blubbered into a hanky, “So, it’s humans against aliens, and time is running out…”
“Ohhhh, really?” moaned the Doctor. “Did you have to say

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Say It With Flowers

[zazie11]

Wow - yes! After an emotionally wrenching interlude, this chapter is a very exciting plunge back into the rest of your story.

Who ya gonna call? The reference made me laugh, and I love the idea that The Fellowship of the TARDIS are all sitting around watching it together (they started the movie marathon without us!).

"Mister Couldn’t Live In 1969 Without His Wispa Bars??” *gigglesnort*

“Ohhhh, this is never good" Heheh - oh, Lisa ... gone, but not forgotten. :D

The Doctor shaking her rump to the emergency lights ... xD

I'm glad Martha called the Doctor on her righteous indignation, regarding Jack still having the weevils. It's a good example of how people try to deal with the messes the Doctor isn't around to help with, and you drive home Jack's loyalty to the Doctor in his keeping mum about River. Not that one has to do with the other, but it just shows that, at heart, Jack is trying to the best he can. *squeezes Jack's bottom* :D

Love the Torchwood "B Team" banding together to get 'er done.

“She’ll be good luck. Her

Re: Say It With Flowers

[psyfi_geekgirl]

"Mister Couldn’t Live In 1969 Without His Wispa Bars??” *gigglesnort*
YES! And I actually had to research candy in the 1960s in the UK for this line! Did you know that the Wispa bar wasn’t launched until 1981 as a trial in the north? So yes, the Doctor would have been quite cranky without them!! In the course of my research, I also found out that you can only get Wispa Golds in Australia-they’ve got caramel in them! So naturally the Doctor would occasionally pop down to stock up because-DUH, caramel!!

YAY, you got the flashing red lights! For some reason I always fear people forget about red vs mauve in canon-but I love using it. In fact, in chapter 10 (Amelia), when the Doctor sits with Rory in the parlor sipping tea, she sees River’s teacup that has just recently been abandoned-and it has her mauve lipstick still on it. This is a subtle extra hint of a warning about the whole sitaution!

“She’ll be good luck. Her name means ‘Immortal,’” she saidYet more research-looking for a Middle Eastern woman’s name with a meaning that would

[develish1]

*waves* later than ever this week, but got here eventually :)